the diary game || 08-26-2022 || the old me || @jal08

in hive-139765 •  2 years ago 

Warm greetings from me @jal08 to my loyal steemian friends wherever you are, may you always be healthy, aminnn. on this love day, meet again with me, where I want to share my love with you with the activities that I have done today with the joy of brothers, friends and also with the children who are playing happily, it seems I am very happy to see those who are having fun. playing, remembering when I was a kid.

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I happened to be at my friend's party house, which is not far from my house. Then I saw the children who were playing, I tried to take some pictures. Life's journey is very precious, happy or dark, happy or sad, all will be memories of the future. then. There's a lot of flavor that builds up from there that couldn't have been made if we weren't in that place. Family, friends and the environment around us are the parts that make us into adulthood.

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the beauty of togetherness

I myself also sometimes miss the old days when I was in school, because at that time there were no children who held cellphones because they were afraid of being scolded by their parents, so we often interacted with real friends, not like now who always busy themselves surfing in cyberspace and ignore friends who are around us.

It's so beautiful, remembering my childhood. sometimes I want to go back to my past, where the pain I felt when I fell off the bike was much more fun than when I fell in love and wasted away, maybe you also feel how beautiful it was when you were a kid playing with your friends both at school and in the village where you live..

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when I grow up.. enjoy a cup of coffee with my friends

enjoying coffee in the afternoon, at 5:00 in the afternoon, I was invited by my friend, met at a coffee shop not far from where we live, here we joked a lot. talked about our daily activities. we went to school when we were 15 years old, now we meet again, and have a family. With different professions, we sometimes tell stories and reminisce about when we were single. it feels like we want to go back again when we were still in school. my beautiful childhood..

thank you and I am very happy to be able to participate in the context and I am also very happy to all my friends who have read my story. I am happy to invite the following Steemian to see my post @udyliciouz, @monjuapollonia @patjewell

greetings from me. @jal08

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Thank you 👍👍👍

Having fun with friends and family is always nice.
Thank you for sharing some great times with us.

Next time when you write a post check your grammar, spelling and punctuation.

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enjoying coffee in the afternoon, at 5:00 in the afternoon, I was invited by my friend, met at a coffee shop not far from where we live, here we joked a lot. talked about our daily activities. we went to school when we were 15 years old, now we meet again, and have a family. With different professions, we sometimes tell stories and reminisce about when we were single. it feels like we want to go back again when we were still in school. my beautiful childhood..

My version:

Enjoying coffee in the 05:00 in the afternoon. I was invited by my friend.

We met at a coffee shop not far from where we live. Here we joked a lot and talk about our daily activities.
We went to the same school when we were 15 years old, now we meet again.

We both have a family and have different professions. We sometimes tell stories and reminisce about when we were single. It feels like we want to go back again when we were still in school.
My beautiful childhood..

Can you see

  1. The difference more paragraphs make?
  2. Capital letter at the beginning of a sentence

Lastly, make your images a bit smaller.

Ps: Keep on writing! You have great potential.

Thank you

All that remains now is for me to see how you do it (•ิ‿•ิ)
Go for it!

Thank you

Thank you so much @jal08 for sharing this quality content with us about daily activities

However, try to use markdowns most especially text justify so that your text should be readable. You should also try to create quality content with atleast 300 words and above.. also try to upvote others and neve leave your voting manna to be ideal at 100%

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