He is a true poet, I agree. You see, he wrote about what he was s concerned with. What was in his heart. That's the poetry.
Ukraine and its women are not in your heart, you just took general words and rhymed them :) The poem has the same meaning & even similar words as "Ladies of Grace and Elegance".
If you want to become a real, great poet, you should write deeper.
He is a true poet, I agree. You see, he wrote about what he was s concerned with. What was in his heart. That's the poetry.
Ukraine and its women are not in your heart, you just took general words and rhymed them :) The poem has the same meaning & even similar words as "Ladies of Grace and Elegance".
If you want to become a real, great poet, you should write deeper.
But again: you have a huge potential and talent!
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I admit that I have a lot to learn. Kazi Nazrul Islam is a very great man. And I will try to make myself more beautiful like real poet.
thanks a loot dear admin @antorv .
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