Lady In White

in hive-148441 •  5 years ago 

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There's something about you

It's in the way you look

The symmetry in your face

is a perfect juxtaposition to your grace

There's something about you

that caught my eye

you remind me of a song

I once knew

I can't recall

but the thoughts of you makes it all beautiful

You descend on me like a dove

With a message of greens

You are a discovery of elegance

walking in the flesh like poetry

Touch me with your eyes

See through me

I admire your composure like music

The simplicity in your beauty

add colours to my world

There's something about you

You are easy on the eyes

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Commentary

Hello Reader,

Lady in white is a smooth free write of soft poetry. It was born from an imaginary muse. She comes around my state of thoughts whenever I require a muse to use. I write this piece to help you put your thoughts in a pictorial written form.

If this is your first tie reading a Mellexy piece then you should know that Melley is like a song written to be read in the eyes of the reader with an alluring tune in their subconscious.


Progressive Theme

The poem illustrates a lingering thought that is yet to be captured. The writer goes deeper to find out the reason for being inquisitive. Only to discover how amazing the lady in white astonishingly marvels him. it creates an image of perfection. Words were used to express angelic themes like the celestial to describe the feeling of love-struck.


Thoughts

Have you ever been love-struck? That moment you see someone for the first time or perhaps that moment that persons get caught up in your eye. Then you begin to find the words to express such a feeling.

I thought about writing this in the third person but I'm glad it turned out great this way.
So have you met your lady in white and how did you feel.

Dante is here no fear

Lanre Sonde
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