With You & Always

in hive-148441 •  5 years ago 

~

Under the viel

lay a kindred heart

With sentient dreams to live eternal

embroidered with the fabrics of love

Soft and tender

In dreamy clouds of white roses

Endless visions

of you and me

Satifying as you lean into me

You make it all clear

Like palm trees by the beach

I need you around

Everyday, holiday and into the nights

To feel and experience you

To build castles of memories

You are more than enough

My blessing, My promise

I found myself with you

I stand with you

Always & forever

~

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Hello Reader,

I bring to you his soft piece of poetry straight from the comfort of my heart. Slipping out this thought is comforting as I love to express my dreams in pictures of my feeling of love. This mellexy is another special piece. Every mellexy piece I have written are special.

As a hopeful romantic with wild imaginations, I will continue to share my humanity with opening up all in my heart portal where these beautiful thoughts are created. Maybe someday I'll take you on a trip to my colourful fairyland.

If this is your first tie reading a Mellexy piece then you should know that Melley is like a song written to be read in the eyes of the reader with an alluring tune in their subconscious.


Progressive Theme

The poem begins with the description of the subject while gradually setting the tone of the theme with a dash of fantasy and reality. Expressing words that make it feel physical and transcends beyond. The poem uses short phrases and sentences to create a heavy imaginary to appeal to the readers.


Thoughts

I usually don't think about wedding bells or the process but when I found the image used for this piece I thought about it for a moment and it felt good sorta. I guess that's why some see it as an achievement. Anyhoo, the thoughts on this piece drove me on an endless road to take a view of what love should feel like on the long haul. It should be endless with memories. No matter how dark the times maybe when we look back we should think only beautiful memories.

As always, I'm interested to know what you think. Poetry appeals to readers in different ways as it yields and conceives different meanings to people from their various places of thoughts.

Dante is here no fear

Lanre Sonde
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