Without You

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You make want to live forever

To stay with you to the end of days

Laying awake in your arms all night

Talking about everything that makes us happy

You're my fire under the water

In my dreams

I see your face

You're my moon

The difference in my life

I'm incomplete without you

Could barely feel myself without your light

I found myself sinking without your touch

My world feels heavy without your smile

Call my name

The power in your voice fills me up

It gives me comfort

You stepped into me world

You made it seamless and perfect

I have dreamt and woken up in different worlds

The feeling is never the same

like a world with you

I wish our bodies will never age

but I'll love you till I go to dust

Take me away

like the build-up feeling to a kiss

I'll give you all my affection

If I could, I'll find a way

that in death we'll find ourselves

in a transcendence love

don't let me drown

in thoughts of you

my passion lies with you

you make me believe in love

I can't live without you

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Commentary

Hello Reader,

I wrote this piece in the thought of you that someday you may need these words. These words will help you in times when you feel you're missing someone special. Use these words to tell that special person that life won't make any sense without them in your life.

Enjoy.

Progressive Theme

The poem starts with a description of eternal. the description basks in painting a life of eternity while it expresses the fact that it is impossible.

However, there are thoughts of such possibilities but a life without your special person is meaningless.

This poem uses classic enjambment with a tempo that flows from each line to the other for easy reading while using simple words to express a feeling.

Thoughts

This piece is about the one you love. It is all about loving someone so much you don't want to live in a world without this person.

This thought is about loving someone forever and beyond. I have always thought of this for myself and I know someday this will be my reality.

Dante is here no fear

Lanre Sonde