Student Name: @ngozi996
Overall grade: 7.8
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Provided the course of action in this specific situation . Good work | Important details are missing such as the student didn't mention prioritizing their own safety first. This is a very important step. There's no mention of gloves or a wrapper. You didn't mention using a dry bandage. | [Grade: 1.8] |
| Question 2 | the student listed down the course of action for an electrical burn. | You didn't mention flowing water. The medical emergency team should be called immediately. You didn mention using a clean dry bandage or a cloth. | [Grade: 1.5] |
| Question 3 | Listed the steps of managing an emergency chemical burning scenario. | The reason listed is wrong. The thing that went wrong was that the burn site wasn't flushed for a longer period of time. You didn't mention calling for medical support immediately | [Grade: 1.5] |
| Question 4 | The student managed to present their logic in choosing the answer. | The ethics as well as the Triage dictate that the patient with a 2nd degree burn should be treated first as the patient with a third degree burn has his nerves damaged so currently he is not in severe pain whereas the patient with a 2nd degree burn might be going through excruciating pain and if not attended immediately would be left with grave consequences | [Grade: 1] |
| Question 5 | the student managed to present an infographic. Infographics in the medicine field serve as important tool for having access to more information in a single place. These are typically necessary to have as a first aider. | [Grade: 2] |
General Feedback: The student has shown a good understanding of this week's course. There were a few shortcomings which I'm sure will be avoided in the upcoming posts.
Thank you.
Regards,
@huzaifanaveed1
Thank you for your feedback @huzaifanaveed1
Most of the corrections you stated are taken into consideration though I wrote on a few of them severally with different use of English,but had to delete them as my plagiarism checker kept saying they were plagiarised even though they were not.
Can you recommend a good plagiarism checker I can use for the subsequent classes??. Thank you
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