RE: The Better Life Diary Game ||28- 09- 2024 || Attending The Independent Fitness Festival And Resuming Work

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The Better Life Diary Game ||28- 09- 2024 || Attending The Independent Fitness Festival And Resuming Work

in hive-153970 •  2 months ago  (edited)

Dear Free Writer,

It is good reading you again. Let's continue our #wewrite journey. Keep in mind what you write is a learning experience for all of us and feedback is important. Have fun and don't forget to read your comments, they can be very useful.
We thank you for your participation. Below you find the review of your publication which is part of We-Write-Lesson 3.

CriteriaResult
What went well - 1 point-
What to improve
MisunderstandingYou did not set a timer and wrote for 15 minutes/You did not talk in your diary about the Talk Channel topics you answered.
Title - 2 point-
Hashtags - 1 points1
A flashy start - 2 points1
Creativity / out-of-the-box thinking - 3 points1
Original/no AI text👍
Following the rules - 1 point-
Bonus - right community - 1 point1
Total max 11 points4
Verification date:September 28, 2024

Bonus reason: The diary is posted in the right community

What went wrong? You were at the top. I believe you know what I am going to say or?

  • What happened with the catchy title?
  • Why does your diary look like the average one and you use the average template.?
  • You missed mentioning the topic of what your diary should be about (Talk Channel topics)
  • A diary is an outlet for how we feel! We talk as if we speak to your best friend
  • You didn't set a timer and wrote for 15 minutes without a break

Your photos look great.

🍀♥️


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  ·  2 months ago (edited)

Ohh my God, i slept off the post isn't completed. I missed task three rules as I didn't check on them, i was out of time coming back from work to write, too complicated and frustrated, i just wanted to make an entry because i didn't want to hang halfway.

But I don't understand this title ( tak channel topics) can you let me understand?

Thanks for the review, i appreciate.☺️

Gm

You joined Task 1. What did you write there? This is what you should have written about in your diary.

With you I agree a post is better than no post.