Hi everyone I am fine and I hope that you all will be also fine .Today I am here to write a story in the Freewriters Community . Today is Saturday but I have written a story on the Topic (two strangers) Sunday.
Once at midnight, a man named Akbar was going to his grandmother's house it was about 1 hour left to reach his grandmother's house.On a scary route where there were no car on the road Except Akbar's car .
Akbar's car was low with petrol so he went to a near petrol station where he filled his car with petrol and he also bought some snacks from the market.THen he started his journey again .
But on the way he saw 2 men on the side of the road who were looking on Akbar's car.After a while the two men were movis their hands, After seeing that Akbar knew that they would be required an help. So Akbar stopped his car .and went to the men .The one man who was tall said that could you drop us to a near by Village.Then AKbar said ok and the two men went to AKbar car and sitted in the car .Then Akbar started the car and started his way to the strangers village.Akbar was also much scared .On the way the tall stranger was talking with Akbar. Suddenly Akbar saw the feet of the stranger it was in the opposite direction. After seeing that the heartbeat of Akbar started fast and he was acting that he does not know that the stranger feet is in the opposite direction. On the way Akbar stopped the car and said to the strangers.That I think so the car is damaged with something .Could you both strangers push the car so that the engine be started again .So when the both men started pushing the car .Then Akbar started the car and accelerate the car so that the car can move with high speed because he want to be save from the stranger because he was thinking that it could be another creature .But while going to his Grandmother house his car stopped in a way where there were no one that could help him then suddenly he saw two men and asked him for help when he saw their faces clearly He was shocked because the were the same strangers from who Akbar saved his life .Akbar asked from him that how did you came here that fast.Then the strangers said to him that we were the villagers of the nearby village . Maybe you would be confused.Then Akbar again checked his car .THat time Akbar car started .So Akbar went to his Grandmother's house.Where he shared the whole story with his grandmother .His Grandmother said this kind of moment mostly happens in this area ,So that you should be careful .After listening that the Akbar went to the city next day and also his Grandmother went with him .
It sounds to me that you used today's prompt scaring and the Sunday prompt two strangers.
Is it a Halloween story, are those two men ghosts?
I felt Akbar's fear and as he stopped for the hitchhikers I thought: don't!
I don't think it's safe to take two strangers along at night. I still give hitchhikers a ride but not if dark or at night. It's better to be careful
I wonder why grandmother warned and for what? And why is it that both go to the city, It feels as if the two strangers didn't harm Akbar nor his grandmother.
Thanks for sharing the creepy story
A great weekend to you.
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Dear brother !
Applause for your worthy comments.Yes I am agree with you that Akbar should not give lift to the hitchhiker at nightespecially on midnight . As you have asked that why did Grandmother not warn Akbar about the enchanted route ?
Actually Akbar wanted to give her a surprise he didn't tell her about his arrival at Granny's house .and they were afraid of the strangers(Supernaturalbeings)because they knew their reality , So that they both went to the city.
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Thank you for replying and explaining. It's a good think grandmother didn't know Akbar was on his way otherwise she would have been worried to death.
Let's hope Akbar learned a lesson and on the day they go back granny's home isn't robbed by thieves.
A great day to you @abcullah79. It was good to read you. Your start is good for a campfire or before Halloween starts (a good excuse to stay home).
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Try you use the hashtags in the right order. You should use the first 4 to promote your story so use:
story #scary #freewrite #creativewriting this time.
I wonder if you have SBI if not there's no need to use the hashtag #sbi-skip.
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muy buena historia, Sigue creando contenido, de eso se trata el arte de escribir. Constancia. Un saludo.
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