Fuente
Words that seek to tell anecdotes
Ears that seek to listen attentively
Stories that shape our lives.
and meanwhile, by telling and listening, new life stories are formed.
Those that become shared moments
Because that's what friendship is about
Be present in the stories told, be present in the stories shared and be present in this thing called life.
Hence, friendship is for me the most genuine way of loving, because you do not intend to change anyone, simply be
Palabras que buscan contar anécdotas
OĂdos que buscan escuchar atentamente
Historias que dan forma a nuestras vidas.
y mientras tanto, al contar y escuchar, se van formando nuevas historias de vida.
esos que se convierten en momentos compartidos
porque de eso se trata la amistad
estar presente en las historias contadas, estar presente en las historias compartidas y estar presente en esto llamado vida.
De allà que la amistad sea para mi la forma más genuina de amar, porque no pretendes cambiar a nadie, simplemente estar
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MenciĂłn @inspiracion @wakeupkitty
Dear Free Writer,
We continue our #wewrite journey with our last lesson an introduction to poetry. We hope you had fun. Don't forget to read your comments, they can be very useful. Below you find the review of your publication which is part of We-Write-Lesson 6.
Poetry: Lyric
Remark: La amistad es la forma más genuina de amar, el amigo no juzga, no reprocha, se complace en acompañar, apoyar, animar, consolar.
El poema es una prosa en la que expresas el concepto de amistad, solo te sugerirĂa agregar más emociones, lo que sientes de forma particular, más describir esas emociones que conceptualizar, de eso se trata la poesĂa. Hiciste un buen trabajo igualmente.
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What a lyric should look like is free but it should express the feelings of the speaker.
If it comes to the English text it doesn't feel as if the speaker shares his deepest wishes and feelings with the paper.
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