Well it was a much more sensible and natural ending to the one I had in mind that involved her being a supernatural entity XD
And it was thoroughly amusing how most of the story comprised of the narrator character arguing with themselves XD
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Hahaha.. that would have been fun. Her being a supernatural entity.
I thought of that but wanted to stay grounded.
The language she spoke was Bangala. Language of West Bengal India.
The narrator argues a lot with themselves. I think I project myself on my characters. Maybe that's why they spend more time arguing with themselves. Hahaha.
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Too much projection makes it Mary Sue (or Gary Stu if you prefer). About this much or a bit less makes it believable and relatable ;D
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Hahaha, being perfect itself is a flaw.
I had to google Mary.
And I get it why many would hate her but I kinda like that character. She is OPed without having any power.
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