RE: Story of two friends (Villagers) .

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Story of two friends (Villagers) .

in hive-161155 •  12 days ago 

Hi dear, I notice that in your stories there's always an end where good is done for the entire village. How filthy rich can one be to make that happen. I wonder if al the villagers would respond in the same way since I learned two things in life:

  1. If you give, pamper, people are grateful for a day or week, next the find it normat and start demand more, and they hate you (especially if you refuse/are out of money)
  2. Those who give will never receive themselves.

Your story is a bit chaotic and I had a hard time with the first sentence. Try to pay a bit of attention to it since this is the first thing everyone reads.

you also mixed they where it should be the
Example: the apple, the boy, the children, the food, the car

We are busy, they are sleeping.

I wish you a great Saturday and thanks for writing with us.

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