Belphegor! This is some good heavy shit. I definitely love "In Blood"~
I'm having a hard time following what you're saying in this review but I know you probably didn't write it in English. It's definitely tricky when you don't speak English as a first language, so hopefully as you take the time to write more you will be able to find a reliable translation site and a friend or two to look it over to help it make a bit more sense.
Don't worry about posting a lot in one day. I suggest that you spend more time looking around, making friends, and learning more about how the platform works~ it will really help you on the path to getting more readers! If we end up with a pile of posts in the Heavy Metal community that are too difficult to understand then I'm going to slow things down a little bit and mute them out of the community feed on that basis~ take your time, we'll look forward to the content you make.