Your writings are quite okay, but you just need so set your first photo as a land scape...
You also need to make an Introduction
Which is to tell us what the story will look like.. and you also need to complete it with a conclusion. And indicate bus like ...
Its interesting to read your stort. But the truth is that am unable to understand it all. Please next time, i think it will be good to include an introduction. That will help us to understand its direction. @estyroberts, am looking forward to read more stories from you
Greetings @estyroberts
Your post is well information and what is outstanding, is the story
Sorry to say, please I lost understanding due to laymanship skills.
Thank you for sharing your story with us, hoping to read through your next chapter
What a lovely day you gat my dear friend.
Your writings are quite okay, but you just need so set your first photo as a land scape...
You also need to make an Introduction
Which is to tell us what the story will look like.. and you also need to complete it with a conclusion. And indicate bus like ...
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Impressive short story. I know its a developing story and cant wait for the next chapter. But your creativity and use of school setting is good.
Note: Please next time, use landscape image for your thumbnail, and not portrait. Check out this post below for the correct use of images:
Image Content Etiquette: How to manage images correctly and make your posts look great.
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Ok, thank you for reading, I’ll definitely use the landscape in my next post.
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@estyroberts this is a good shot story, can't wait to read the full story, take care.
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Thanks for reading.
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Thanks very much
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Very nice and creative story
I can't wait to know about the new student
I so much enjoyed the story.
You can continue to drop stories like this for us
Thanks for sharing @estyroberts
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Thanks for reading.
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@estyroberts Thank you for producing original content on Steemit.You have got an interesting story here a.s I hope to read from you next time.
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Thank you.
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Nice article, great storyline and I'm keeping my eyes open for the proceeding chapters.
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Its interesting to read your stort. But the truth is that am unable to understand it all. Please next time, i think it will be good to include an introduction. That will help us to understand its direction. @estyroberts, am looking forward to read more stories from you
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Very interesting and short @estyrobert57, cant wait for the next chapter. Well done dear.
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Thanks for reading.
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Greetings @estyroberts
Your post is well information and what is outstanding, is the story
Sorry to say, please I lost understanding due to laymanship skills.
Thank you for sharing your story with us, hoping to read through your next chapter
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Thanks for reading.
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You are welcome 🤗 dear
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No critics, you actually did well for a first timer, all your story books are paying off @estyroberts
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Thanks for reading 🤗.
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