Looking gorgeous
Staring deeply
I feel my checks getting flushed
You like a Mistry to me
So complicated
But i felt so safe
You so dominating
I wanna document our growing relationships
Kiss me let me melt in your arms
I don't wanna never let you go
I felt pain in the stomach
I have never felt like this before
This is agonizing
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@ gracellagift
Is this your first time writing? @gracellagift
You did a pretty good job but it's a bit casual and naked.... there is little or no figures of speech to coat it not to mention the awkward shortness of the poem
But nevertheless, you really did great!!! Don't let your ink dry up and check out other Amazing poem and poets...you'll be good❤️
@mesonia
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Thank you @mesonia
For corrections and comment
But should the length of my poem matters
Note it is a lyrics poem
Which talk about emotions and feelings
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And also this is my first time of posting a poetry
But not my first time of writing poems
Thanks
@mesonia
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Quite good. This community is growing in every sense.
So glad to see you all making perfect participations.
Proud to be a member of this community.
This touched my heart and is my favorite verse.
#twopercent #pakistan
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❤️❤️
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Nice @gracellagift simple , easy and good!!! Keep up the good work
Ladyroyal 👸🏼
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@ladyroyal
I appreciate
Happy Sunday ❣️ and happy new month
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Thanks dear
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