Hello there, everyone! I wish you a peaceful and productive day, as well as good health. Here is a piece of fiction I've written for you to read. Have fun!
I am startled awake by the sound of unfamiliar music and hear the rhythm of my heart. I'm terrified as if I'm being engulfed by an immense sea of water. I can't tell what I'm going through because I can't see! What is going on with me? I'm completely baffled. I squint and pull my lower eyelid down, but all I see is black! I groped in the dark, feeling alienated. I have an unsettling feeling that I am being watched. I can hear whispering voices in the distance. I stand up and move forward, but a bright white light radiates through me, and the intensity of it is such that I can hardly see.
Where am I? Closer, I hear a rustling sound of wings. Moving forward though I cannot still see, I hear angelic voices sing praises. Someone patted my shoulder, led me to a room, and drew a chair for me to sit in "Do not be afraid" a resonant voice told me because He knows that I am uneasy and the entire situation is confusing me still further. He holds my icy hands, then my face. On His hands, I smell a very strong and sweet odor that's hard to ignore. Then He snaps His fingers and it surprises me and it makes me see. I look at the surroundings and I am in awe of what I see. I was taken aback, and I looked at him puzzled. "Who are you, and what brings me here? He did not answer. Instead, he said, You'll no longer be lonely, and no questions will be asked. Come, I will lead you to the source of your pain."
The garden is bursting at the seams with blooming flowers! When I look at myself, I see that I am dressed in a white gown and that someone in a white dress appeared. I'm surprised that she/he is not only dressed in a white gown, but also has wings on her/his back! I turn to face Him, but the intense white light that surrounds Him almost blinds me. He clings to me and embraces me. "It can be anything you want it to be: ultimate destination, eternal home, or the celestial fields. Now go! Someone is waiting for you."
I ran quickly, and when I got to the person He was referring to, I was stunned to see the one I had loved, who was smiling at me and waiting for me. He embraced me tightly as we both sobbed for joy. We looked at Him, and He said, "You'll both be eternally happy now."
Thank you for reading! This is my entry for the #SteemitPhilippines Community's "Fiction Writing Contest." Thank you for your unwavering support. I am inviting @sarimanok, @jurich60, and @reginecruz to partake in the contest.
All glory and honor belong to God
Godspeed,
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What a story! Nosebleed lang gyud ahahaha ..super galing mo talaga Sis...
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Yan ang eternal happiness. Salamat.
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a grabeha, pang libro na ni te baπ₯°
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Uy, salamat at nagustuhan mo ang kuento.
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Auntieee! Super ganda. Para akong nagbasa ng poem kahit short story to.
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Ay, ang aking no.1 fan. ..hahaha. Salamat dear at nagustuhan mo ang flash-fiction story.
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Hi!
This post has been chosen to be recommended for booming support today. Continue creating high-quality content here at Steemit Philippines Community.
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Thanks for the boost!
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i believe this is something which your heart desires ate - to be with the person you love.. pero ansakit naman ng line na I'll take you to the source of your pain...
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I still keep that desire in my heart. Hoping that one day we will be together again in the next Life.
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Maganda sis! Ngayon ko lang nabasa. Thank you for this wonderful story.
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Salamat kapatid! Nabasa ko ang kathang-isip na kuento mo at natatawa ako dahil it sounds 'familiar'...hahaha..THE JOY OF LIFE!
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Oo nga ano, reflections of the past...
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Yes! as crystal clear.
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Makatang-makata ate ah.. ππ
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Salamat sa iyong pagdalaw.
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Wow nice!
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Thanks boss
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