Outraged

in hive-169911 •  4 months ago 

Left at the altar, you decide to seek revenge on your ex.

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Gothic church in the centre of the capital city of Utrecht. The guests wait outside until the bride and groom arrive. The priest wears a white lace dress as if he were a baby being baptised. There is whispering and speculation. The elderly priest disappears into the church just before the sky darkens and a shower breaks out. The bride and groom arrive. The carriage stops in front of the oak door, the couple walks across the rolled-out red carpet.

The groom, 45, Don Juan, a runaway bride
The bride, 34, a powerful lady
Ron, 60, the neighbour, red flaming hair
The priest, 72+, wine is his lust

Hurray for the bride and groom!

There is cheering and clapping. A somewhat premature guest throws handfuls of rice at the couple who have just married in front of the civil registry. The neighing of horses is drowned out by cheering guests. The bride strides in on the arm of the neighbour because her father refused.

In front of the altar - the priest has changed his clothes and drank the sacramental wine, he lets out a burp - the bride waits for her husband. The priest's face speaks volumes, his mood is excellent. The organ is playing but it is not "Here Comes the Bride". The candles are not lit but the room is decorated with 13 giant flower arrangements that would make an impression at a funeral.

Neigt out Ron is Abbey. He H oases at the beide.

Where is he

The neighbour's fiery red hair looks like a campfire that flares up after a piece of plastic or PVC furniture sets fire. Smoke is in the air. He has never been fond of the groom and keeps a close eye on his girl's well-being.
The bride swallows and does not look around when the guests get noisy.

What do you think, will he be back or?

The toilet, he said he had stomach cramps...

He's not coming back I knew it! How are we going to solve this? That drunk priest should distract everyone.

With a snap of his fingers, the drunkard jumps into line and gestures to take in the bottles of wine for the guests. Carnival music fills the church and while everyone is jolting around the neighbour and bride leave the church via the backdoor.

Back home

She is outraged

How dare he, I have been cheated on, he has broken the contract and emptied our bank account!

Her phone beeps. Her eyes flash and shoot fire and hit the kitchen wall when she reads the message sent by the bank. A burned spot shows on the tiles.

Revenge.

She smiles. There is more than one bank account to trace the bastard. She lights one of his cigarettes

I told you not to betray me as we made a deal. Did you forget honey what you said? Did you forget who I am?

The neighbour waits. He recognized her at first sight.
Cigarette smoke cringles and find a way to the owner who left in a hurry and forgot about taking along all his property. The package with his DNA turns out to be a solution.

I wish you a long life, may loneliness, sickness and poverty be your share mingled with full awareness of what you did to me and those 33 before me.

Ron enters the kitchen.

Well done, they found him with a new victim.

Is Hermine alright?

Ron hands over an envelope.

Your contract. You are hired.




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Date: 1-9-2024
Prompt: @freewritehouse
All pictures: are mine


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Amazing how quickly what was going to be the start of a beautiful life together turns into the deepest darkest hell.

That is indeed a big miracle to me.
It feels as if the memory of beautiful has no meaning.

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