Hello and welcome to Steemit. I am sure you will have a great journey here.
The basic purpose of Achievement 1 post is to know about you and your hobbies, education, past experience with crypto and much more. This seems to be a very short post to me. Please if you can add to this post some more information about yourself.
You can add points such as:

• Education
• How you came to know about steemit.
• Your hobbies and achievements.
• Your past experience with crypto.

I will verify you once i see some improvement and later it will be curated when it's my turn.
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Please also add achievement1 tag in the first five tags of your post.
Yours, @haidermehdi.