hi @ethankyou, your story is quite short. Here are the questions you need to cover:

Your name and age
A country where you reside now
Your area of work or your study
Your experience with crypto
Your hobby and passion, dislike
What sort of posts written by others are you looking for
What sort of posts do you think you'll be creating (these can change, so don't feel locked in.)
How you found Steemit and what you hope to accomplish here.

Also you did not add any tags to your post. Use tags like @intrduceyourself #newcomers #steemexclusive #yourcountry #live for an introduction post