Hey Ray,
Welcome in our family!
I very like your post, although there are two things which were made wrong:
- put #Achievement1 in tag section. It's very important, as it helps greeter to find the content which they will be checking. Without it, they will approve your post with a delay
- never tag any of steemcurators. It makes their work much harder as they get hundreds of notifications.
Besides that you've made a great job: your post includes a lot of information, great photos and with some html tricks you've made your post look very well
If you are looking for interesting communities, check that list. Its a list with over 150 active communities grouped by theme. You will surely find something for yourself.
We don't have snooker community (at least I don't know any), but there is one dedicated to all kind of sports and other about your second passion, cricket. You could also join Steemit Pakistan and offer your services as graphic designer on skillshare group.
As the newcommer, you should join Steemit Nursery too. You will learn there how to write posts and its the easiest way to get noticed as many powerful steemians are checking publications there.
I personally would be very happy if you would join my community "Steemit Weekly" and write the article there which might win the reward and be published in the newspaper. Currently we have two contests - check it out.
Continue making Achievements in Newcommers' community. Good luck and... Welcome on Steemit.com!
If you will have any questions, if you will need some help, feel free to tag me and Ill do my best to help you ;)