๐Ÿ“œ Newcomers' Certification

in hive-172186 โ€ขย  4 months agoย  (edited)

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So, you've signed up and are itching to get started. The Newcomers' Achievement programme has been recommended to you so here you are, wanting to know what it's all about and here we are, ready to explain it to you.

If you haven't done so already, your first port of call should be to have a look through this collection of guides which should help you to quickly understand the Steemit environment.

The previous Newcomers' Achievement Programme had been running for 4 years and served a valuable purpose. Time has come though for an updated approach, to reflect the way Newcomers have been approaching the platform.

The aim of this certification is to help you to embed yourself within the wider community, to learn all of the ins and outs of the platform, to make friends and most importantly, to enjoy your time here.

Of course, taking part in this is completely optional.

This approach has been designed to help you to settle in and the Greeters are available to help you via the Discord channel for newcomers if you have any questions.

So where should you start?


1. ๐Ÿงญ Explore

Ok, I know you're desperate to post something but the best way to get started is to see what others are up to. Explore some communities or search with some tags and see what piques your interest.


2. ๐Ÿ™‹ Introduce Yourself

You're in the Newcomers' Community so head back to the main page, hit "New Post" and get started. Remember, you only get one "1st Post" so make sure to start off on your best foot! If you're not sure where to start, take a look at these 8 tips or the previous requirements for Achievement 1. Just remember, if you're genuine, honest and be yourself, you can't really go wrong.


3. ๐Ÿค Welcome

You'll then be greeted by one of the Greeters Team - remember, these are users just like you, volunteering their own time so make sure that you're nice! Whilst one Greeter will welcome you, other members of the team will be available on the aforementioned Discord channel for newcomers.

Based upon your interests, our Greeter will be able to recommend some communities to you and help you to get started. This initial phase of certification will take one month (you should be given a date) and when this is up, we invite you to return to write a "Progress Report". The greeter will also give you a new label (๐Ÿค) to indicate that your certification journey's begun.

During this one month period, we'd like to see you interact with the community and learn about the platform - we've aggregated a list of useful guides filled with advice, tips, and tricks to help you. You can find the specific things that we'll be looking for in your 1st Progress Report...


4. ๐Ÿฅˆ 1st Progress Report

Please, don't use these points as a template - templates are so boring ๐Ÿฅฑ - we're interested in hearing about your experience so far. You could use some of the following ideas as prompts...

  • A summary of the communities you've joined, why you've joined them, which you like the most and why.

  • The topics you've been writing about.

  • A list of key people you've interacted with. An introduction to the people who have had the biggest impact upon your experience so far (NOT an opportunity to tag whales) and the unexpected relationships that you've experienced.

  • Your most successful post - Why do you think it was successful?

  • Other observations - What have you learnt and discovered that you weren't expecting to.

  • Your plan and expectations for the next month on the platform (please don't mention growing your account!)

Once again, please post this in the Newcomers' Community, we'll be looking out for it.

If you've been inactive during the month or not made an effort to interact with the community (or for other reasons which will be explained to you), we'll ask you to continue interacting for a little bit longer and add a โžก๏ธ to your label. If you've not taken note of our guidelines and decided to plagiarise or abuse the platform, we'll add a ๐Ÿšฉ. It's worth noting that these labels grow and don't shrink so please make an effort!

We'll also speak to some of the Admins and Moderators in the communities that you've been most active in and once everybody's happy (and we're generally a happy bunch), we'll award you with a shiny medal (๐Ÿฅˆ) to reward your efforts so far and move along to the next stage (with a new date).


5. ๐Ÿฅ‡ 2nd Progress Report

By this stage, you should be nicely settled and starting to understand the more nuanced parts of a Blockchain Based Social Media Platform so in this report, we'll be looking for:

  • An update on everything you shared in your 1st Progress Report. A lot can change in a month, new communities, new relationships - we'd like to hear about it.

  • Witness Voting - Who have you voted for and what made you choose those particular witnesses?

  • Withdrawals - Whilst we like people to keep powering up, we'd also like to know that you've learned how to make a withdrawal. Just a small one will do - the more power you have, the better!

  • Tools - We've introduced you to some useful tools and websites to help you gain knowledge and we'd like you to share your experience with us. Did any stand out as being particularly useful? If so, why? And if you could create or improve any of the available tools, what would you change?

You'll also be at the point in your journey where you should know as much (if not more) than us, so tell us about it.

All being well, this is the point at which you're officially, no longer a Newcomer and are ready to spread your wings. We'll update your label with another medal (๐Ÿฅ‡) and set you free.

As with your 1st progress report, we might extend your stay (โžก๏ธ) and even after you've fled the nest, any misdemeanours and the ๐Ÿšฉ is only an update away.


It can be hard joining a new Social Media platform - a new community with all of our existing relationships. But if you put enjoyment before rewards, be honest and be yourself, then a fun, exciting and rewarding journey awaits you.

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ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

We hope this new approach will attract authors who want to create content of various kinds. I think this is a more friendly and warm approach, which in itself encourages moderators and community leaders, in addition to greetes, to get involved in guiding and interacting with Newcomers.

We hope that newcomers arrive and join the various communities of their choice, that they can create content that inspires them that is related to themselves, and that they interact by finding good friends. If it happens this way, progress report 1 and 2 will be an exciting task for them.๐Ÿ˜Š

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

A good change! Well done to the Greeters!

What is going to happen to the #newcomers tag?

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

The #newcomer tag (written without "s"). The first three months are used for the user to indicate that they are a newcomer.

I think that if they use it it is still giving that information. :-)

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

Okay, thank you. ๐ŸŽ•
The only change will then be that the author will be a newcomer from the date of sign-up and not from the date of passing the first achievement post.

ย  ยท ย last monthย 

Hi I'm new here, hope I'm welcome on-board?

ย  ยท ย last monthย 

Me too. Just joined today. I cannot find how to update my profile picture. Are you having the same problem? All of the posts regarding how to do it say: Go to settings, but when I do I do not get the screen with the URLs ...

ย  ยท ย 3 months agoย 
Hola un gran saludo a toda esta hermosa comunidad aquรญ estoy de nuevo listo para publicar contenido mas asiduamente. luego de un viaje inesperado, me conecto de nuevo. He regresado y estamos listos para seguir batallando con buenos, actuales y excelentes contenidos.

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ย  ยท ย 3 months agoย 

Hola saludos a la gran comunidad de steemit. Aun en espera de verificaciรณn.

ย  ยท ย last monthย 

Hola @oswaldorafael, si lees las publicaciones que estรกn fijadas en la comunidad podrรกs saber como es la verificaciรณn actual, no se trata de solo hacer una publicaciรณn, se trata de incorporarse a la actividad de publicar e interactuar con otros, como lo explica el mensaje que te han dejado en tu publicaciรณn de presentaciรณn.

Te sugiero atender a ese mensaje y seguir las recomendaciones que allรญ te indicaron.

Si tienes dudas igual puedes preguntar. Saludos.

ย  ยท ย last monthย 

Estimada, creo que en mi caso no aplica รฉste tipo de progresos, es decir, empecรฉ de manera desconocida a manejar รฉsta red social. ยฟEs asรญ? Sucede que estoy en plan aprendizaje. Saludos y excelente dรญa.

ย  ยท ย last monthย 

Hola @abnerpantoja, en tu caso eres un usuario que sabe como desenvolverse en la plataforma, aunque estas aprendiendo, puedes continuar como vas.

A traves de este tipo de progreso, como lo has mencionado, lo que se busca es brindar orientaciรณn a los reciรฉn llegados, pero ellos aun deben ir construyendo su blog con contenidos, publicando, interactuando con otros.

ย  ยท ย last monthย 

Entendido. Agradezco su respuesta. Entonces, seguirรฉ trabajando de manera orgรกnica en รฉste sitio. Seguro diario se aprende algo.

Ahorita lo que deseo saber es cรณmo se configura lo del llamado "Status Club".

ย  ยท ย last monthย 

El Club se refiere al porcentaje de recompensas con el que decidas hacer Power Up. Por ejemplo el club5050 se refiere a hacer Power Up, con el 50% de las recompensas y retirar el otro 50%.

Para mรกs detalles y cรณmo se hace puedes leer la segunda publicaciรณn del numero 7, de este post:

๐Ÿ†• New to Steemit? Start Here!

ย  ยท ย last monthย 

Entendido. Lo reviso mรกs tarde. Estoy trabajando en un pequeรฑo ensayo sobre el oficio de la escritura, para publicarlo hoy en Steemit.

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 
ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

Es casi como decir, que como al principio que ingresabamos sin los logros pero si con una presentacion que es el deber ser.

Porque asi como cuando uno se presenta en la escuela, en el trabajo o en una comunidad desde el primer dia.

Lo que quisiera acotar es que si hay muchos que llegan porque les invito otro en su mayoria fue asi, pero si los invitan, sean como su angel de la guarda, no los dejen solos hasta que ellos puedan volar, aunque siempre se les ayudara.

Yo que tengo 6 aรฑos, cuando me invitaron quien lo hizo desaparecio, solo me dijo escribe pero mas nada. Yo tuve que abrirme paso, preguntando en Discord en las comunidades que ahi estan, como los comandos, las fuentes, las imagenes, pero aun sigo aprendiendo.

Cuando estuve como segura de invitar y ayudar a otros lo hice, no siguieron todos, los que quedan aun soy como su supervisora, porque se le escapa a veces algo de los comando y les digo, tambien si no quedo justificado el texto porque le falto algo.

En el camino tambien he como adoptado a otros je je m que los veo como algo perdidos, confundidos y los ayudo tambien.

Si los cambios van hacer para bien que sean, bienvenidos a todos los que van llegando, ya por ahi tengo unos invitados que luego llegaran, pero primero les hablare de la plataforma, para que no se desesperen.

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

My hope is that this list of guides will help any newcomers who are left to learn by themselves. I've tried to reference it as much as I can but I also know that not everybody comes with the intention to read and learn.

We're also in the process of compiling a "Newcomers Friendly" list of communities so hopefully, they'll get more guidance that way too.

When I joined, I did so alone. I didn't know anybody and had to figure out everything by myself. I can't remember it ever being a problem. I found some things strange (like the Trending page being full of trash) but I eventually learned why. Sometimes, it's nice to learn by yourself instead of being fed everything. Perhaps that's why I'm still here and others aren't ๐Ÿคทโ€โ™‚๏ธ

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

Hello friend, I have no problem in helping but it's kind of uncomfortable that after taking some time to explain to others, they leave after three publications or because they didn't see good rewards.

It is not always like that, it is not a lie that at the beginning most of the Venezuelans here we shielded ourselves in that, but then it became like a habit to write, to share, because it is not only that, but we also learn.

Many complain that the big or small votes of the sc or the booming ones do not arrive, but since I arrived here, someone told me: a penny a dollar is worth, and this will grow and my motto since I got here is: EVERYTHING COUNTS, EVERYTHING COUNTS, EVERYTHING ADDS UP.

And after 6 years I feel at ease, otherwise I would have left the platform a long time ago, but not here I am still here and I will continue until I really see the time to retire, which is not right now.

I will help anyone who wants to belong to the platform. And about the guides of course I will tell them.

Thank you.

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

You have a good approach. For many who join, they've been promised $100 per post. They've been shown the Trending page and thought "I can have that" but the reality is very different. And generally, the people who chase the money are often the people who don't find it. I've found it's the people who know themselves and are here for enjoyment who have been the most successful.

EVERYTHING COUNTS, EVERYTHING COUNTS, EVERYTHING ADDS UP.

And you'll earn more here than you will on Facebook, Twitter or Reddit.

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

And you'll earn more here than you will on Facebook, Twitter or Reddit.

That's right.

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

This sounds to me like a good well-considered curriculum.
Special thanks for the video in the end - enjoyed it a lot, too.

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

This frame seemed particularly relevant:

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(apart from the "We can help" bit)

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

Off-topic comment:

I loved the video, I didn't know it, it is full of references but the most obvious is that of Alice in Wonderland. I imagine you saw it too, the rabbit on the table...

Writers block is more popular than you think...hopefully we can open the doors to unlock it :D

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

I'm not sure I'd ever seen the full video before but I know the song, particularly the chorus of "Watcha waiting for?"

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

Your explanation for newcomers is very important for always Steemit users.

Because there are still many among others who do not know.maybe with your explanation all of them will be very understanding to be able to communicate well and improve ourselves..

I am happy to read your post because the details are very useful for us thank you for sharing your experience about Steemit

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

Excelente publicaciรณn

Estaba buscando esto. Regresรฉ a Steemit el 17 de febrero y desde Abril que comencรฉ a invitar a esta plataforma y no veรญa el movimiento como cuando hice mis logros.

Me alegra mucho estรกs nuevas guรญas.

Estoy sรบper agradecida.

Una vez mรกs: Gracias equipo.

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

We needed something like this! I am sure it will bring the best out of the genuine newcomers.

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

I love this, please my leaders @the-gorilla, @inspiracion, @sduttaskitchen please when can I begin this thank you ๐Ÿ˜Š

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

You've already taken your first step with the previous Achievement 1. I recommend reading as many of the links in this article as you can and come back and write a report in a month's time - using the information in this post as a guideline. Sound good?

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

Thank you very much I will do just that

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

Sincerely speaking I must say your idea is a really brilliant one, this will fight away account farmers which has been a major issue and it would attract more of dedicated steemians into the platform.

Before I go I must say I love your video below the post because it came with mixed emotions, initially it made me laughed and secondly he gave me a sense of motivation and inspiration.

Thanks for sharing โ˜บ๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿผ

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

this will fight away account farmers

Maybe, maybe not. They always find a way of ruining things.

ย  ยท ย 5 days agoย 

this is very helpful

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

Good work

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

Hello @the-gorilla, Everyone is talking about how good the initiative is which I do not disagree with but with the removal of the team newcomer curation account how do you expect these newbies to stay motivated?

If we are to be truthful for ourselves majority of people(us) who joined here including us are here for the earnings. If steem should crash badly I am not sure plenty will be left on the platform actively posting.

With the removal of the curation account, you are cutting the numbers of new comers by 90%. I doubt many will make it past the first month especially those who are not mentored by bigger accounts who has access to some curators that will support them.

Isn't this marginalisation?

I myself with my steem power and reputation I'm still going days without votes then how much more them. Nothing is being regulated here from the engagement challenge winners selection to the way votes are distributed on the platform by curators.
Everyone in power can do anything provided the end it with the phrase "our selection was based on quality of post".

I am not bothered, I am still here actively posting and sharing my knowledge because I love it. Thanks to advice from people like @goodybest who said I should do what I love and forget about votes.

This my comment is not an insult or argument with anyone. The last time I spoke out against the alleged misappropriation of engagement challenge selection I got the brunt of it on my account.

This is just my observation. If anyone takes an offense then I apologise as that was not my intent.
I am speaking on behalf of the newcomers. I enjoyed myself very well because of the newcomer curation account.

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย (edited)

Iโ€™ll share my thoughts after asking you a few question;

  1. With the support of a steemcurator account (I.e. prior to these changes), how many users reached 3 months of activity (either a percentage or number out of 10)?

  2. Aside from the people you have introduced or already know, how many introductions (I.e. Achievement 1) have you read and subsequently replied to?

Depending upon your answer to (2), my final question is either;
a) why is this number so low?
b) what made you want to reply?

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 
  1. I do not know because I am not in the curation team. But I guess some of them do leave. But instead of tackling the reason they left you are tackling the reason they came. After newcomer 3months I know how those people suffered because the ones I introduced myself half of them left, who wouldn't leave when you stay up writing quality stuff and not getting a vote for 2weeks straight. I don't blame them and I tell them if you are tired power down and go because I myself I am not getting much but I'm still here.
    So I am one of those still here.

  2. I only visit the newcomers community to do an achievement task or welcome someone I referred. I don't have any business there, I meet and interact with newbies on their post if they happen to write on same topic as I do.

A. I believed I answered this.
B. As I said I do not go there to read achievement task and I do not think I will be going there to read progress 1 and progress 2 report either.

Nonetheless I am not against the initiative, after all it will limit the number of newbies greatly and with the old ones still leaving I think it will even help steadfast ones like me to be seen.

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ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

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ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

Me parece excelente tener este link como recurso a los reciรฉn llegados.

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

Terimakasih telah berbagi panduannya untuk pendatang baru, saya rasa pendatang baru akan sangat mudah bila mengikuti panduan yang telah anda bagikan, terimakasih atas tontonan vidio yang sangat bagus ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€, saya sangat menikmatinya.

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

This post has been featured in the latest edition of Steem News...

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

Nice

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

Hello, I'm Richard and I sincerely join this platform today and I went through the newcomers' guidelines and I believe I'm welcome in this Community

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

You are most welcome. Hope you enjoy your content creating adventures. The most important thing is to love what you do.

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

Alright ma, I will do my possible best

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

Hello Richard, you are indeed welcome. Take a look around and when you're ready, why don't you share an introduction and let us you about yourself.

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

Pardon for the delay, I had connection issues

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

Am saving the link to this post. A lot of people want s to come on board to create content. This would really help me to guide them. Thank you for taking your time for this amazing content.

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

Holaa amigas @valentinach, @mile0526, lean esto estรก muy cool y comprenderรกn muchas cosas. โ˜บ๏ธ Un cambio muy bueno๐Ÿ˜Ž.

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

Hi Friend ! In this post, the Discord link for the newcomers' community has expired. Would you like to update it? I want to join the Discord server.

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

Iโ€™ll do it in a few moments, just away from my computer at the minute.

@inspiracion has a better links if sheโ€™s online and I can update the post later ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

Thanks, friend,

just away from my computer at the minute.

no worries. I'm in no hurry. Update it when you're free, and I'll join then.

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

Hi @rashid001, here is a new link:

https://discord.gg/6jzSzDQEZR

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

Hi Dear @inspiracion ! Thank you so much ๐Ÿ‘

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

You are welcome ๐Ÿ˜Š

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย (edited)

Back to school project! Hehehe ๐Ÿคฃ

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

Ma'am, what is the reason for removing my verification? Please tell me!

https://steemit.com/hive-172186/@maashraful/4t3tle-achievement-1-introduction

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

Hopefully Newcomers interaction will be even greater with this update.

ย  ยท ย 3 months agoย 

Just directed a couple of newcomers who joined Steemit through me to this post. Let's see how it goes. ๐Ÿคž

ย  ยท ย 3 months agoย 

1

ย  ยท ย 3 months agoย 

I'm not understanding anything

ย  ยท ย 2 months agoย 

I apologize @the-gorilla for not publishing my introduction post in the newcomers community. I hope you may consider it for the verification, I shall be grateful, indeed.

https://steemit.com/achievement1/@hoorain85/achievement-1-verification-through-introduction-by-hoorain85-or-or-18-07-2024

ย  ยท ย 2 months agoย 

Thanks for your guidance! Love you.

ย  ยท ย 2 months agoย 

Tengo una pregunta, tenia tiempo inactiva si quiero hacer el primer paso de esta nuevas publicaciones de steemit, puedo hacerlo?, Es que quiero conocer a mas creadores de contenido pero no se si yo tambien pueda cumplir con estos nuevos logros:'D

ย  ยท ย 2 months agoย 

I see that you've completed all of the achievements of the old programme so there won't be any benefit to following the new programme. You just need to get active again ๐Ÿ‘

ย  ยท ย 2 months agoย 

oh yayay thanks!, i can to do new videos for the new ppl?

ย  ยท ย 2 months agoย 

@the-gorilla please verify my post. I started my achievement 1 from last 19 days. Plz verify it

https://steemit.com/hive-172186/@seharsharif/achievement-01-introduce-myself

ย  ยท ย 2 months agoย 

Thanks for taking out your time to write this complete guide for new comers, I'm impressed and I'm not taking this for granted.
Although, I do not really understand the platform yet, but I'm working towards it.
I must say that I'm happy and lucky to be here.
I'm open to exploring the platform, engaging in some communities and also meeting new people.
Thanks for the guidelines and deeply impressed.

ย  ยท ย 2 months agoย 

Hello @the-gorilla, thank you very much for the post. You answered many of my questions as a newcommer. There are some things that i don't know how to do. but with your explanation, i start to understand. Hopefully i can continue to be honest and write good things and be who i am.Of course, i also want to level up from a newcomer and try new things. Just like what you expected, i will try to be better in the future.
thank you very much. Warm Regards๐Ÿ™

ย  ยท ย 2 months agoย 

Hi @the-gorilla , why nobody is cheking my achievement post, is their no team member available to check it?

I posted 4 days ago.

ย  ยท ย 2 months agoย 

@the-gorilla i have shared my achievment 1, one month ago. And I want verification. So its a humble rewuest to you that plz verify my avhievement 1 . Here is my achievement 1
https://steemit.com/hive-172186/@seharsharif/achievement-01-introduce-myself

ย  ยท ย 2 months agoย 

That was really helpful sir. I love the fact you express some certain facts to get more better in the platform . I'd looking forward to explore with friends

ย  ยท ย 2 months agoย 

Hello mister @the-gorilla, how are you?

Do you know that I wrote my second progress report about a month ago,
but I am still wondering why there has been no significant response from the Newcomer Team,
Actually, what I want to confirm is whether the certification process is still ongoing?

I know you can enlighten me on this, please do so.

Sincerely @fajrularifst

ย  ยท ย 2 months agoย 

Hellooo, nice to be the new comer here:)

ย  ยท ย 2 months agoย 

Teirmakasih ini sangat membantu saya.

ย  ยท ย last monthย 

like steemit

ย  ยท ย last monthย 

I had already posted an introduction post in a different community. Do I still need to introduce myself again in the #newcommerscommunity? @the-gorilla

ย  ยท ย 26 days agoย 

This has been some good information, I was just curious how do I know if I'm eligible to make my second achievement post?

ย  ยท ย 18 days agoย 
ย  ยท ย 8 days agoย 

thank you๏ผŒ useful for me๏ผ

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย Reveal Comment
ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

I don't know what this is. What is this? AI's interpretation of my post?

Where did you get your "Recent data" from?

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

hey @ the-gorilla, I thought this information would be helpful for all the viewers, that's why I wrote this.

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

But you didnโ€™t write it. You used AI to generate it. How do I know this? Because AI is particularly good at taking facts, rewriting them and getting stuff wrong. Which it has done in the comment youโ€™ve shared.

So itโ€™s not helpful, because itโ€™s inaccurate. So youโ€™ll understand why your comment has been muted.

ย  ยท ย 4 months agoย 

are you serious, do you really think I generated this comment by AI,
I only use AI for structuring my sentences, that's it and to make it formal, I did not generate it completely.
its not fair