Hi there,
Welcome to Steemit I hope all the personal data you give will not take you into trouble.
Your post looks very good for someone who just joins Steemit. Mine did by far not look like this and I only heard a few months ago that I should justify posts. This takes me 75% more of my time and what is worst I can't tell the difference if I use my phone except for the fact I can;t read all text because it looks terrible.
Perhaps you like to take part in this contest of a new community Student & Steem?
https://steemit.com/hive-116583/@hive-116583/student-and-steem-comment-contest-back-to-school