RE: This is why i hate Gods Unchained At The Moment

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This is why i hate Gods Unchained At The Moment

in hive-175254 •  3 years ago 

Hi @emma55

Please read your post before publishing it and try to minimize amount of errorrs (typos).

Example: "For thosr who havw" - 2 mistakes within such a short sentence.

Also use comma more often. Reading long blocks of text is not pleasent. An example:

For thosr who havw never heard of Gods Unchained, it is a free to play game which gives it's users true ownership of cards and this is according to what they say atleast, in the crypto space section of games God's unchained and Splinter Lands are the two huge competitors when it comes to card games but if you ask me i like Gods unchained more because i think it is less scripted compare to splinter lands that is just scripted any way back to the reason i hate Gods unchaine.

You've wrote it like it is just one sentence.

ps. don't take my words as criticism. rather think of it as sort of feedback.

Cheers, Piotr

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Ok thanks @crypto.piotr i will try an improve