Sir, a very touching and beautiful story you represent in front of us. You have elaborated on the purity and innocence of young love. How realistically you shared the small emotional feelings like her laughter and smile. Your beautiful story explains the experience of some points of one-sided love like – the feeling, and words left unspoken and these feelings leave lasting memories into our minds. At the end the twist where she revealed her feelings is so touching. Yes, it is the hard reality of life that fate and circumstances keep people apart but no matter what the love and respect for those memories remain green. I got a lifetime lesson that ho you appreciate the past without letting not be affected by your present happiness in life. Thank for inviting me and allow me to read this beautiful story. May Almighty bless you always.
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Hello my friend,
I really liked your writing style and selection of words. The comment you made on my post made me very emotional. It is true that when we are at that age, our emotions are very high. Later, a person can control his emotions under the burden of responsibilities. That was one such love story in which I controlled my emotions at that age, otherwise in today's time, boys and girls do not listen to their career or anyone's advice.
Thank you and best wishes. Once again, I am grateful from the heart for your beautiful and emotional comment.
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