Hello @memamun thank you for participating in this week's lesson. We have assessed your entry and we present the result of our assessment below.
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Welcome back to class dear student.
Let me start by commending you for a job weldone, the effort put i to this work is quite commendable.
• Task 1: You have not clearly attempted this task. You did more of defining and mentioning features of these logo types, you didn't highlight conditions where these logos can be used and when not to be used.
• Task 2: Your logos are actually not bad, they only need a touch of professionalism to it. Your wordmark logo is cool but why the name "BOOK SHOP" the name is generic and not unique, about the second logo, you only need a touch of professionalism. I would recommend you expose yourself more to logo design by looking up more lessons and process online to give your logos some nice finishing touches.
• Task 3: Your flyers is cool, just some recommendations. Balance in your arrangement is paramount which you have not clearly achieved. You didn't maximize the principles of design. Your major image element is on the right your other text element should all be properly aligned to the left, they are on the left quite alright but not chronologically arranged. You should also drop down the size of the logo slightly. In all you have presented beautifully. I wish you the very best.
Criteria | Remark |
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Plagiarism Free | ✅ |
AI Free | ✅ |
Attention to details | 4.7/5 |
Overall Outcome | 4.8/5 |
Total score | 9.5/10 |
Regards
@lhorgic❤️
Thank you very much for my post review and comment 🥰
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