RE: SLC S22 Week 1 - Hebrs for children

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SLC S22 Week 1 - Hebrs for children

in hive-183480 •  23 days ago 

Hi, @sisol, Thank you for participate in the herbal medicine week 1.

Here is the review of your post participation.

1. Teething Remedy: (1.5/3 Marks)

Dear student, you have prepared a remedy for children's toothache in which you have added herbs like cloves and garlic.
But you did not tell how to make remedy step by step through pictures.
You have added clove oil to it. Clove oil is not suitable for small children because its use causes blisters and inflammation in the mouth of children.

2. Research Assignment: (1.5/2 Marks)

You have written about the three safest herbs for children, but honey is not an herb here.
3. Herbal Remedy for Bedwetting: (1.5/3 Marks)

Here you have prepared a remedy for the bed wetting problem of children but here fennel does not control the bed wetting problem of children but it is a diuretic herb.
Let me tell you one thing here that honey cannot be given to children under one year of age.
You have not shown the step by step method of making the remedy with pictures and have not attached pictures of the herbs.

4. Accuracy and Creativity: (1/2 Marks)

I hope you have learned a lot about herbal medicine.

Total Marks5.5/10
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