Writing competition "133" - A place in wonderland

in hive-185836 •  last year  (edited)

Wonderland has been told so many times as a part of stories that "Venice" heard from her elderlies. Venice is a young girl in her early teens. She is from a well-known family from her community in a country in Europe. At her age, she still believes in fairytales but since she is getting older sometimes she believes them, and sometimes she's not.

One day, on a sunny day she is alone and she finds herself sitting on a steel chair in the front yard of their house. It is a perfect place to rest or to unwind since the chair is underneath a lush tree and around is Bermuda grass that her father is trimming once in a while when it needed to.

Then she noticed that their front yard was actually very beautiful because of its lush green appearance the soft cool breeze of air underneath the tree is very inviting for someone to take a nap. While she is marvelling for the first time at the appearance of their front yard she leans on her head on the table in from of her and then the soft cool breeze of air makes her very comfortable.

And then to her amazement their front yard's appearance began to transform in front of her eyes slowly but surely their front yard became a place that is usually described in stories she heard, their front yard is now looking like the image below...

At the front is a lush green landscape and in the background is a body of water with mountain-like figures further at the back and further is an image of a crescent moon. She smiled and was very happy she never thought of something or anything at that time because she only felt happiness.

She ran, jumped, soaked her feet in the bodies of water, and walked back forth before darkness came. She is waiting for this moment to see a place like Wonderland and she did. She is amazed at the green landscape the body of water that is so peaceful and the crescent moon that seems to be guarding her in whatever she does.

She feasted her eyes on the beauty of the surroundings and then ran, jumped, and walked multiple times until she got tired. Because of being tired, she sat underneath an apple tree and for a few minutes she again feasted her eyes on the beauty of the place she felt very peaceful and secure while she was marveling at the place.

She felt sleepy so she lay down underneath the tree and fell asleep. When she woke up she saw their front yard and the beautiful wonderland-like place was gone, then she realized that she had fallen asleep when she leaned her head to the table. She said to herself, it may be a dream but she felt in very very real if ever she would dream about the place again she wished that it would be for a longer time.

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Excellent narration, I enjoyed it

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