#CLUB100 | MIXED FEELINGS IN A POEM

in hive-195150 •  2 years ago 
Hello to all, hope you all are doing great! I don't know how I'm feeling right now but i decided to put it down in a poem i hope we understand ❤️‍🔥

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The wind pushes me to go,
The breeze urges me to be gentle,
The sunset reminds me of passing away,
The sunrise tempts me to renew,
The trees urge me to freeze,
And the rain urge me to pour down,

The sky calls me to be wide,
The dawn inspires me to be reassured,
The river motivates me to strive,
The lake carries me to slack,
And the night encourages me to burn.

My soul expanded to encompass you, so that you were not talking, laughing, or thinking in your room, but within myself!

Both of us..
the moon of truth
from behind the fence
Sometimes we sleep at night
Sometimes we are afraid of the light.

The idea of running hurts me. I do not like to mobilize my members to catch up with everything that could not walk with me.

Perhaps you made me suffer, maybe you just coated everything to make it seem like i walked alone. I worked the walk while you walked by me

I made a monster out of my pictures to terrify her. And she was not afraid, but she was embracing the pictures.

You say with the eye there is no word that translates it
The depth of the poem embarrasses poetry..

You are tender enough to melt the cruelty of the world in an instant, and I am so used to cruelty that I am in a constant panic at your tenderness.

We sprouted everywhere, we loved the rain and sanctified autumn, we believed that the mountains are fleeting, the seas are fleeting, and civilizations are fleeting, but love remains.. Suddenly we parted.

Seperate ways which led to different paths joining back to that secret path we both took.
I'm filled with feelings and it overwhelms me, like i just made a best selling book.

As the deer pants after the water brook, I'm stuck with this feeling with my pen, looks like a song I'm looking for the hook!


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@wandass73, cône and give your rating sur, i dey wait 😅

Thank you so much for inviting me and everything is on point you did very well and keep it up.

Here I flipped to the end , there it seems am thirsty for more . Though I couldn't detect exact what am thirsty for , it seems more like water needed to quench this thirsty .

By my side behold a stream , rushing down to get my thirsty throat quenched. Right in my front I saw a rock flowing more like fountain of great waters .

By stepping further there I get stuck , right within my stuck-up moment . There I get find a brook by the corner , stepping up to drink to my satisfaction .

Truth is I so much love the texture of this write up . Is quite inspiring , thank you for sharing .

What a comment! My God! This is amazing as comment.

Thank you.

Amazing poem here, you're always bringing up new stuff and new ways of making someone smile. I love this poem coz it takes me to different places at the same time, but still keeps me focussed on reading the poem. Kudos Sir

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