It's a pleasure.
Some tips from me.

1. Don't clutter up your main photo. One good photo of the baby would grab more attention.
2. Change the intro of your post by making it different from other Steemians.
3. You need to use the hashtag #thediarygame for diary posts.

Here are a few links that will also help you going forward.
https://steemit.com/hive-153970/@patjewell/the-5-main-reasons-why-posts-goes-wrong

https://steemit.com/hive-153970/@patjewell/make-your-comments-and-replies-count

https://steemit.com/hive-153970/@patjewell/how-to-write-that-perfect-diary-post

https://steemit.com/hive-153970/@patjewell/what-to-write-about-on-steemit

https://steemit.com/hive-153970/@patjewell/what-you-need-to-know-about-tags-or-hashtags-on-steemit

https://steemit.com/hive-168072/@patjewell/why-do-steemians-use-plagiarism

https://steemit.com/hive-168072/@patjewell/how-to-write-a-good-introduction-paragraph

https://steemit.com/hive-168072/@patjewell/advice-for-steem-engagement-challenge-season-10

https://steemit.com/hive-153970/@patjewell/the-5-main-reasons-why-posts-goes-wrong

Good luck!