You will regret losing us || Poetry || Best Of India

in hive-196725 •  4 years ago  (edited)

You will regret losing us,
When we will not be.
You will find,
The whole world deserted,
When we will not be.

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No easy way,
Loyalty destinations but,
How far will you go alone?
When we will not be.

We don't want our own lives,
The grief is yours,
Whom will you oppress?
When we will not be.

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The best day of our lives,
Which we spent together,
If you forget them,
You will regret it,
When we will not be.
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So deep.
Nice poem
Keep writing

thanks, Kajal Bitoni G

Nice poem. It describes loneliness in a quite good way.

But I found a problem. In. The first paragraph you mentioned image source just after your poem without any space. In a first glance I thought ita part of poem. 😅😅😅
I would suggest you to post source in a link form like mention source into this [Source]( and below the picture. And I think it should look pretty good.

#affable #india

ok brother thanks

Beautiful poem😍
Keep posting 😇

#affable #india

Thanks, Amritraj brother