Showing My Poetry Skillโœ๏ธ (Weekly Contest)

in hive-197809 โ€ขย  3 years agoย 

๐’ข๐“‡๐‘’๐‘’๐“‰๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘”๐“ˆ ๐“‰๐‘œ ๐“Œ๐’ฝ๐‘œ๐“๐‘’ ๐’ฎ๐“‰๐‘’๐‘’๐“‚ ๐’ฎ๐“€๐’พ๐“๐“๐“ˆ๐’ฝ๐’ถ๐“‡๐‘’ ๐’ธ๐‘œ๐“‚๐“‚๐“Š๐“ƒ๐’พ๐“‰๐“Ž!

It's my first post in here, nevertheless I know @milakz for a while๐Ÿ™‚

My name is Yuliya, and I'm a poet and prose writer.


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โ„ณ๐‘’, ๐“‡๐‘’๐’ธ๐’พ๐“‰๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘” ๐’ถ ๐“…๐‘œ๐‘’๐“‚


My very first book of poems has been published in 2016, and I've named it "๐“ฆ๐“ธ๐“ซ๐“ซ๐“ต๐“ฎ๐“ป" (original: "ะ’ะพะฑะปะตั€"). That is how it looks โฌ‡

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Today I can't even imagine my life without poetry in it. It's everywhere: in my joy and my depression, in my love and my hate. My being and my nothingness.

โ„’๐’พ๐“‰๐‘’๐“‡๐’ถ๐“‡๐“Ž ๐’ป๐‘’๐“ˆ๐“‰๐’พ๐“‹๐’ถ๐“๐“ˆ





I'm gonna post two poems. The first (called "Old Antonio") is my own one. And the second is my official translation of Mykola Bidenko's poem from Ukrainian into English.



"๐“ž๐“ต๐“ญ ๐“๐“ท๐“ฝ๐“ธ๐“ท๐“ฒ๐“ธ"


๐’ช๐“๐’น ๐’œ๐“ƒ๐“‰๐‘œ๐“ƒ๐’พ๐‘œ
๐‘œ๐“ƒ ๐’ฝ๐’พ๐“ˆ ๐‘’๐’พ๐‘”๐’ฝ๐“‰๐“Ž-๐“ˆ๐’พ๐“๐“‰๐’ฝ
๐’ท๐’พ๐“‡๐“‰๐’ฝ๐’น๐’ถ๐“Ž
๐“ˆ๐’พ๐“‰๐“ˆ ๐’พ๐“ƒ ๐’ป๐“‡๐‘œ๐“ƒ๐“‰ ๐‘œ๐’ป ๐’ถ ๐’ฝ๐‘œ๐“๐’พ๐’น๐’ถ๐“Ž ๐’ธ๐’ถ๐“€๐‘’
๐“Œ๐’พ๐“‰๐’ฝ ๐’ถ ๐“ˆ๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘”๐“๐‘’ ๐’ท๐“Š๐“‡๐“ƒ๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘” ๐’ธ๐’ถ๐“ƒ๐’น๐“๐‘’
๐’ถ๐“ƒ๐’น ๐“ˆ๐’ถ๐“Ž๐“ˆ
๐“‰๐’ฝ๐’ถ๐“‰ ๐’ฝ๐’ถ๐’น ๐“ˆ๐‘’๐‘’๐“ƒ ๐‘’๐“ƒ๐‘œ๐“Š๐‘”๐’ฝ, ๐’ฝ๐’ถ๐’น ๐“‰๐“‡๐’พ๐‘’๐’น ๐‘’๐“‹๐‘’๐“‡๐“Ž๐“‰๐’ฝ๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘”,
๐’ถ๐“๐“‚๐‘œ๐“ˆ๐“‰ ๐’ถ๐“๐“ ๐’ฝ๐’ถ๐’น ๐’ฝ๐’ถ๐“…๐“…๐‘’๐“ƒ๐‘’๐’น ๐“‰๐‘œ ๐’ฝ๐’พ๐“‚,
๐’ถ๐“ƒ๐’น ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐‘’๐“‡๐‘’โ€™๐“ˆ ๐“ƒ๐‘œ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘” ๐“๐‘’๐’ป๐“‰ ๐“‰๐‘œ ๐“๐’พ๐“‹๐‘’ ๐’ป๐‘œ๐“‡.
๐’ฉ๐‘œ ๐’น๐‘’๐“ˆ๐’พ๐“‡๐‘’๐“ˆ.


โ€” ๐’ฎ๐‘œ, ๐“‚๐’ถ๐“Ž ๐’ท๐‘’ ๐’น๐‘œ ๐“ƒ๐‘œ๐“‰ ๐’ท๐“๐‘œ๐“Œ ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐‘’ ๐’ป๐’พ๐“‡๐‘’, โ€”
โ„ ๐“ˆ๐“Š๐‘”๐‘”๐‘’๐“ˆ๐“‰,
โ€” ๐’ท๐“Š๐“‰ ๐’ท๐“‡๐‘’๐’ถ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐‘’ ๐’พ๐“‰ ๐’พ๐“ƒ๐“‰๐‘œ ๐“Ž๐‘œ๐“Š๐“‡๐“ˆ๐‘’๐“๐’ป?

Yulia Vrotna


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๐“ƒ๐‘œ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘”... ๐“ƒ๐‘œ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘” ๐“‚๐‘œ๐“‡๐‘’
๐‘œ๐“ƒ๐‘’ ๐“ˆ๐“‰๐“‡๐’ถ๐“Œ ๐‘”๐‘œ๐’น
๐‘”๐“‡๐’ถ๐“ƒ๐“‰ ๐’พ๐“ƒ๐“‰๐‘œ ๐“‚๐“Ž ๐“๐’พ๐’ป๐‘’
๐‘œ๐“ƒ๐“๐“Ž ๐‘œ๐“ƒ๐‘’ ๐“ˆ๐“‰๐“‡๐’ถ๐“Œ


๐“ƒ๐‘œ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘”...
โ„ ๐‘”๐’ถ๐“๐‘’๐’น ๐’พ๐“ƒ๐“‰๐‘œ ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐‘’ ๐“‚๐’พ๐“‡๐“‡๐‘œ๐“‡
๐’พ๐“‰ ๐“Œ๐’ถ๐“ˆ ๐’น๐’ถ๐“‡๐“€ ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐‘’๐“‡๐‘’


๐“Œ๐’ฝ๐‘’๐“‡๐‘’โ€™๐“ˆ ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐’ถ๐“‰ ๐’ท๐‘œ๐“Ž
๐“Œ๐’พ๐“‰๐’ฝ ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐‘’ ๐“Œ๐‘œ๐“ƒ๐’น๐‘’๐“‡ ๐‘œ๐’ป ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐‘’ ๐“Œ๐‘œ๐“‡๐“๐’น ๐’พ๐“ƒ ๐’ฝ๐’พ๐“ˆ ๐‘’๐“Ž๐‘’๐“ˆ
โ„'๐“‚ ๐‘”๐‘œ๐“ƒ๐‘’


โ„'๐“‚ ๐‘”๐‘œ๐“ƒ๐‘’ ๐’ฟ๐“Š๐“ˆ๐“‰ ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐‘’ ๐“Œ๐‘œ๐“‡๐“๐’น ๐’พ๐“ˆ ๐“Œ๐’พ๐’น๐‘’ ๐‘œ๐“…๐‘’๐“ƒ
๐“Œ๐’ฝ๐’ถ๐“‰ ๐’ถ ๐’น๐‘’๐‘’๐“… ๐“Œ๐‘œ๐“‡๐“๐’น
๐’ถ๐“ƒ๐’น ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐’พ๐“ˆ ๐“ˆ๐’ธ๐‘œ๐“‡๐’ธ๐’ฝ๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘” ๐‘’๐“‚๐“…๐“‰๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘’๐“ˆ๐“ˆ
โ„'๐“‚ ๐‘”๐‘œ๐“ƒ๐‘’


๐“Œ๐’ฝ๐‘œ๐“ˆ๐‘’ ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐’ถ๐“‰ ๐“ˆ๐“…๐’พ๐“๐“๐‘’๐’น ๐“ˆ๐‘œ๐“‡๐“‡๐‘œ๐“Œ
๐’พ๐“ƒ ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐‘’ ๐’ฝ๐‘’๐’ถ๐“‹๐‘’๐“ƒ๐“๐“Ž ๐‘’๐“๐“…๐’ถ๐“ƒ๐“ˆ๐‘’
๐“‚๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘’
๐“‚๐“Ž ๐“๐‘œ๐“ˆ๐“‰ ๐“ˆ๐‘œ๐“Š๐“
๐“ˆ๐“ƒ๐’ถ๐“‰๐’ธ๐’ฝ๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘” ๐“ˆ๐‘œ๐“‚๐‘’๐“‰๐’ฝ๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘” ๐“‡๐‘’๐’ถ๐“๐“๐“Ž ๐“๐’ถ๐“‰๐“‰๐‘’๐“‡ ๐‘œ๐“Š๐“‰ ๐‘œ๐’ป ๐“‚๐“Ž ๐’ธ๐’ฝ๐‘’๐“ˆ๐“‰


๐‘”๐‘œ๐’น ๐’ฝ๐‘œ๐“Œ ๐’ท๐’ถ๐’น โ„ ๐’ป๐‘’๐‘’๐“
๐“๐‘œ๐“‡๐’น ๐’ฝ๐‘œ๐“Œ ๐’ฝ๐’ถ๐“…๐“…๐“Ž โ„ ๐’ถ๐“‚

Mykola Bidenko


This post has been written for the Show Your Poetry Skill Weekly Contest organized by @abu78.



I invite @tinochka2 and @zaria56 to participate as I know they are the great poets and song writers.

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ย  ยท ย 3 years agoย 

ะ–ะฐะปัŒ ะฟะตั€ะตะฒะพะดะฐ ัั‚ะธั…ะพะฒ ะฝะตั‚

ย  ยท ย 3 years agoย 

ะ„, ะฐะปะต ัƒะบั€ะฐั—ะฝััŒะบะพัŽ ๐Ÿ˜†

ย  ยท ย 3 years agoย 

I invite @tinochka2 and @zaria56 to participate as I know they are the great poets and song writers.

ะญั‚ะพ ะฒั‹ ั‚ะฐะบ ะฟะพัˆัƒั‚ะธะปะธ? ะฏ ัะตะฑั ะบ ะฒะตะปะธะบะธะผ ะฝะต ะฟั€ะธั‡ะธัะปััŽ...))

ย  ยท ย 3 years agoย 

ะฆะต ะผะฐั” ะทะฝะฐั‡ะตะฝะฝั ั‚ะฐะบะพะถ ั– "ั‡ัƒะดะพะฒั– ะฟะพะตั‚ะตัะธ" ๐Ÿ˜Š

ย  ยท ย 3 years agoย 

ะžะน, ะฎะปะตั‡ะบะฐ! ะกะฟะฐัะธะฑะพ ะทะฐ ะบะพะผะฟะปะธะผะตะฝั‚!))) ะŸะพะฑะตะดั‹ ั‚ะตะฑะต ะฒ ะบะพะฝะบัƒั€ัะต, ะดะพั€ะพะณะฐั!!!

ย  ยท ย 3 years agoย 

ะ”ัะบัƒัŽ)))

ย  ยท ย 3 years agoย 

ะขั‹ ะฟั€ะตะบั€ะฐัะฝะพ ัะผะพั‚ั€ะธัˆัŒัั "ะฝะฐ ัั†ะตะฝะต"!)))

ย  ยท ย 3 years agoย 

Fantastic turnout!

ย  ยท ย 3 years agoย 

Thank you!

ย  ยท ย 3 years agoย 

ะ’ะฐัˆ ะฒั–ั€ัˆ ั€ะธะผัƒั”ั‚ัŒัั ัƒะบั€ะฐั—ะฝััŒะบะพัŽ ะผะพะฒะพัŽ ั‡ะธ ั†ะต ั‡ะธัั‚ะธะน ะฒั–ั€ัˆ (ะฝะต ั€ะธะผะพะฒะฐะฝะธะน)? ะœะตะฝั– ะฟะพะดะพะฑะฐั”ั‚ัŒัั ะฒะฐัˆ ะฒั–ั€ัˆ, ะฐะปะต ั ะฝะต ะฒะฟะตะฒะฝะตะฝะธะน, ั‡ะธ ะทะฝะฐัŽ, ัะบ ััƒะดะธั‚ะธ ะฒั–ั€ัˆ ัƒะบั€ะฐั—ะฝััŒะบะพัŽ. ะฏ ะฟะธัะฐะฒ ะฒั–ั€ัˆั– ะฑะปะธะทัŒะบะพ ัะพั€ะพะบะฐ ั€ะพะบั–ะฒ ั‚ะพะผัƒ. ะฆะต ะฑัƒะฒ ัั‚ะธะปัŒ, ะทะฐัั‚ะฐั€ั–ะปะธะน ะฐะฝะณะปั–ะนััŒะบะพัŽ 1500 ั€ะพะบั–ะฒ ั‚ะพะผัƒ.

Last night it dreamed to me,
To die a life of happy sorrow.
Crimson icicles caress my mind,
As I lie beneath the October moon.

ะœั–ะน ะฟะตั€ะตะบะปะฐะดะฐั‡ ะฝะต ะผะพะถะต ะท ั†ะธะผ ะฒะฟะพั€ะฐั‚ะธัั. ะฃ ัะตั€ะตะดะฝั– ะฒั–ะบะธ ะปัŽะดัะผ ะฝะต ัะฝะธะปะพัั. ะ— ะฝะธะผะธ ั‚ั€ะฐะฟะปัะปะธัั ะผั€ั–ั—. ะ’ะพะฝะธ ั‚ะฐะบะพะถ ะผะฐะปะธ ะดะพะดะฐั‚ะบะพะฒะต ั€ะพะทัƒะผั–ะฝะฝั ัะผะตั€ั‚ั–.

ะฏ ะพะฟะธัะฐะฒ ัั‚ั€ะพั„ะธ ัะฒะพั—ั… ะฒั–ั€ัˆั–ะฒ ัะบ ะทะฐะณะฐะดะบะธ (enigmas). ะฏะบ ะผะพะถะฝะฐ ะฟั€ะพะถะธั‚ะธ ะถะธั‚ั‚ั ั‰ะฐัะปะธะฒะพะณะพ ะณะพั€ั?

ะžะดะฝะต ะฟะธั‚ะฐะฝะฝั! ะงะพะผัƒ 'ะบั–ะฝะตั†ัŒ' ะฝะฐ ะฟะพั‡ะฐั‚ะบัƒ ะฒะฐัˆะพั— ะบะฝะธะณะธ?

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ย  ยท ย 3 years agoย 

Hi! Thanks for commenting. It's vers libre (โ€œfree verseโ€) in Ukrainian also.
Ahaha, I know what La petite mort means. I suggest you to watch the movie called The Little Death (2014).

You ask: Why the end is at the beginning of your book? And the arrow is directed to the girls buttocks. So, did you mean this: the buttocks are the end?..

ย  ยท ย 3 years agoย 

ะ”ั–ะนัะฝะพ, ั†ะต ะพะดะฝะต ั–ะท ะทะฝะฐั‡ะตะฝัŒ 'ะบั–ะฝั†ั'. ะะฝะณะปั–ะนััŒะบั– ัะปะพะฒะฐ ั‡ะฐัั‚ะพ ะผะพะถัƒั‚ัŒ ะฑัƒั‚ะธ ะฟะพะดะฒั–ะนะฝะธะผะธ (double entendre). ะฏ ะฝะตะดะพัั‚ะฐั‚ะฝัŒะพ ะทะฝะฐัŽ ัƒะบั€ะฐั—ะฝััŒะบัƒ, ั‰ะพะฑ ะฟั€ะฐั†ัŽะฒะฐั‚ะธ ะฝะฐ ั‚ะฐะบะพะผัƒ ั€ั–ะฒะฝั–. ะœะตะฝั– ัะฟะพะดะพะฑะฐะปะพััŒ ะบั–ะปัŒะบะฐ ั€ะพะบั–ะฒ ะถะธั‚ะธ ะฒ ะงะตั€ะบะฐัะฐั…. ะฏ ะฟะตั€ะตะผะธะบะฐะฒัั ะทะฒั–ะดั‚ะธ ะฝะฐ ะšะฐะฝะฐะดัƒ ะบะพะถะฝั– 90 ะดะฝั–ะฒ. ะะฐ ะถะฐะปัŒ, ะผะตะฝั– ะฝั–ะบะพะปะธ ะฝะต ะฟะพั‚ั€ั–ะฑะฝะพ ะฑัƒะปะพ ะฒั‡ะธั‚ะธัั ะฑั–ะปัŒัˆะต, ะฝั–ะถ ะฟั€ะธะฒั–ั‚ ั– ะดะพ ะฟะพะฑะฐั‡ะตะฝะฝั, ะฐ ะฟะพั‚ั–ะผ ั ะฒะธัะฒะธะฒ, ั‰ะพ ะฒัะต ะพะดะฝะพ ั€ะพะทะผะพะฒะปััŽ ั€ะพัั–ะนััŒะบะพัŽ ะฒะธะผะพะฒะพัŽ. ะฃ ะผะตะฝะต ั” ัƒะฝั–ะบะฐะปัŒะฝะธะน ั‚ะฐะปะฐะฝั‚, ั‰ะพ ัะบ ั‚ั–ะปัŒะบะธ ั ะฟะพั‡ะธะฝะฐัŽ ั€ะพะทะผะพะฒะปัั‚ะธ ั–ะฝัˆะพัŽ ะผะพะฒะพัŽ, ะปัŽะดะธ ั‡ะฐั€ั–ะฒะฝะพ ั€ะพะทะผะพะฒะปััŽั‚ัŒ ะฐะฝะณะปั–ะนััŒะบะพัŽ.

ะฏ ัะฟะพะดั–ะฒะฐัŽัั ะฒ ะผะฐะนะฑัƒั‚ะฝัŒะพะผัƒ ะฟั€ะพั‡ะธั‚ะฐั‚ะธ ะฑั–ะปัŒัˆะต ั‚ะฒะพั”ั— ะฟะพะตะทั–ั—.

Indeed that is one of the meanings of the "end". English words often can be a double entendre. I don't know enough about Ukrainian to work at that level.

I enjoyed living in Cherkasy for a few years. I switched between there and Canada every 90 days. To my regret, I never needed to learn more than hello and goodbye, and then I found that I was speaking the Russian pronunciation anyway. I have a unique talent that as soon as I start talking in a different language people magically speak English.

I hope to read more of your poetry in the future.

ย  ยท ย 3 years agoย 

I just hate to talk to ppl using google translate๐Ÿ™„ it confuses.

The image on the cover is an artwork of Dima Krasnyi, I like his artworks and bought a few for my book. It perfectly illustrates the mood of the book: let's call it a nude soul.

Never been to Cherkasy but gonna visit that city October, 2nd. I have a children's book presentation there.

Have a nice time on Steemit!

ย  ยท ย 3 years agoย 

If your presentation is at the ะ”ะฝั–ะฟั€ะพ ะŸะปะฐะทะฐ (Dnipro Plaza), I have a few friends who live in the buildings across the street. I am afraid their children are all teenagers now so I don't believe I can trick them into going to the bookstore there to buy one of your books.

I featured my "nude" art in an article about a month ago.

I am afraid that I prefer making jokes to making art. I will let people with real talent do art. I did add a second image in a reply to one of the comments below. You paid Dima to use one of his works on the cover of his book.

How much would I have to pay you?

Good luck with your presentation on October 2nd and say hello to the city for me.

ย  ยท ย 3 years agoย (edited)

ะ–ะฎะปัŒ, ั ะฟะพัั‚ ะฝะฐะฟะธัะฐะปะฐ, ะฝะพ ะฝะต ะทะฝะฐัŽ, ั‡ั‚ะพ ั ะฝะธะผ ะดะตะปะฐั‚ัŒ ะดะฐะปัŒัˆะต? ะšัƒะดะฐ ะตะณะพ?)
ะกะฟะฐัะธะฑะพ ะทะฐ ะฟั€ะธะณะปะฐัˆะตะฝะธะต)
ะ ะตัˆะธะปะฐ ะฟะพะดะดะตั€ะถะฐั‚ัŒ )

https://steemit.com/hive-197809/@zaria56/showing-my-poetry-skill-weekly-contest

ย  ยท ย 3 years agoย 

Thanks for sharing with us this beautiful poem

ย  ยท ย 3 years agoย 

Thanks for the contest โ˜€๏ธ