This is a dense, touching and intriguing writing work. I don't like horror pieces because the literary images (you have several) come back to me, recurrently, after reading. I don't tell you anything else .... I think this short story is very well conceived.
It has been a pleasure to read you @candidfolly
Thank you very much @marcybetancourt. I hope it didn't bother you too much after reading. I am glad, however, that it all came together for you. Sometimes it's hard to know how my own thoughts look from the outside.
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Your story is very well written and that's the important thing.
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