RE: ifc s1 R38 entry; you can make a difference.

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ifc s1 R38 entry; you can make a difference.

in ifc •  6 years ago 

Thanks for the entry! That is an inspiring story. A lil friendly constructive criticism though, since this is a contest you may want to try to enter more of your own words in the future, you didn't say a lot and mostly just dropped links. I think you'll do a lot better if you include more of your own thoughts and words. Also I'm not sure why there was like 5 different clips..? I imagine you could find that clip in just one link? Either way.. Thanks for trying! And it's a positive message. Cheers.

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noted. i will see to improve.
thankyou