"Brian - Very good job. I usually prefer papers be sent in word format so I can comment on them, but I will summarize my comments here. The word you attempted to use was "rogue," not "rouge." Rouge refers to makeup used to make the cheeks look rosier. You also have number of typos - I am sure you will notice these with an additional read-through. You could have defined "eve's-teasing" a bit more fully. However, overall, you discussed the issues in a thorough and intelligent fashion. 96 out of 100!"
This research paper was drafted under significant time pressure. It was actually handed in early, I had a ton of other work to do, plus my full time job. -Brian Ghilliotti
From my college professor:
"Brian - Very good job. I usually prefer papers be sent in word format so I can comment on them, but I will summarize my comments here. The word you attempted to use was "rogue," not "rouge." Rouge refers to makeup used to make the cheeks look rosier. You also have number of typos - I am sure you will notice these with an additional read-through. You could have defined "eve's-teasing" a bit more fully. However, overall, you discussed the issues in a thorough and intelligent fashion. 96 out of 100!"
This research paper was drafted under significant time pressure. It was actually handed in early, I had a ton of other work to do, plus my full time job. -Brian Ghilliotti
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