도시가스/gas kota

in indonesia •  6 years ago 

도시가스/cjsdns

그의 이름 도시가스
가느다란 파이프 관을 타고 들어와
아궁이와 부뚜막을 몰아내고
얻은 이름 도시가스

태생이 본디 촌놈인 데다
형체도 제대로 보이지 않는 놈이
도시가 얼마나 그리웠으면
음습하고 어둠의 통로를 마다하지 않고 달려와
제 몸 불살라가며 얻은 이름 도시가스

땔나무 안 해 좋고 아궁이 불 안 지펴 좋고
부뚜막 대신 주방 깔끔하고 편해서 좋기는 한데
올겨울 유난히 추우니
그놈 어깨의 힘이 잔뜩 들어간 모양새에
집집마다 주머니 탈탈 털리게 생겼다.

gas kota / cjsdns

gas kota namanya
Masuk ke pipa.
Mengusir lubang dan selubung,
gas kota yang didapat

Dia adalah seorang petani kelahiran.
Anda tidak bisa melihat dengan baik.
Jika kau merindukan kota ini,
Jalankan jalan yang suram dan gelap.
Gas kota yang saya dapatkan dari pembakaran saya sendiri.

Tidak ada pohon yang bagus, tidak ada api di rumah.
Saya suka dapur yang rapi dan nyaman, bukannya bubur.
Ini sangat dingin musim dingin ini.
Bahunya tampak seperti dia memiliki kekuatan.
Setiap rumah memiliki kantong yang dirampok.

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      ·  6 years ago 

    Setiap manusia pasti punya rencana dan harapan. Begitu juga dengan yang punya pipa tersebut

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      ·  6 years ago 

    Korea hebat sekali

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      ·  6 years ago 

    아주 음흉한 놈이네요.
    얼굴 한 번 드러내지 않고

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      ·  6 years ago 

    Kami menggunakan Api unggun untuk kehangatan di luar rumah, namun kami tidak memiliki musim dingin. Great Poem Sir.

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      ·  6 years ago 

    Sebuah gas,seharusnya perlu sekali untuk diperhatikan

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      ·  6 years ago 

    saya ingin sekali ke korea

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      ·  6 years ago 

    Puisi yang bagus, kehidupan saat ini jauh berbeda dengan zaman dulu

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      ·  6 years ago 

    Dulu dengan kayu bakar, sekarang dengan gas. Kedepannya kita belum tau

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      ·  6 years ago 

    가스는 기본적인 필요입니다 ... 바라건대 정부는 지역 사회를위한 가스 관리에 더 나을 것입니다. .

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      ·  6 years ago 

    Sebuah kisah yang menginspirasi

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      ·  6 years ago 

    Amazing kawan, postingan yang bermanfaat bagi sahabat steemian semuanya.

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      ·  6 years ago 

    그러게요 왜 촌가스는 없을까요 ^^

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      ·  6 years ago 

    Banyak kota yang sudah mmiliki pipa gas. Sayangkan penduduk kampung setiap hari menjining tabung gas untuk bisa menyalakan api di dapur,
    Bisakah merapikan dapur dengan tabung gas yang kotor?

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      ·  6 years ago 

    Luar biasa ternyata suatu yang menarik ada di korea

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      ·  6 years ago 

    Korea memang negara yang kaya

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      ·  6 years ago 

    Ketika semua kehidupan modern, maka semua hal yang terjadi dengan pelayanan yang sangat baik juga

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      ·  6 years ago 

    Di tempat saya belum ada pengaliran gas dalam kota.

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      ·  6 years ago 

    Korea beruntung memiliki pengelolaan gas yang profesional. Kami di Indonesia masih harus berjuang untuk membeli gas dalam tabung dengan harga yang tinggi.

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