Kosong

in indonesia •  6 years ago 


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Kosong

Aku merasa di udara, tergantung diapit kabut-kabut tua.

Terbalut, hingga jiwa ini keropos dan kosong
Terjungkir atas bawah mengelepak tak bertenaga
Terimbas bulir-bulir kabut yang rontok dan ompong

Kosong, benar kosong terasa

Dentingan waktu tak dapat berhenti
Laju masa tak juga terkendali
Semua itu sangat tersiksa

Tinggalah jiwa kosong ini mengudara

Tak pelak jua ia bermimpi
Rajutan usia turut terbuang begitu saja
Secepeng nilai pun tak berarti

Jangan Lupa Bahagia

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      ·  6 years ago 

    Kosong yang tak terasa
    memiliki nilai yang dalam sebuah aksara
    biarkan alam mengisinya
    dengan petuah penuh makna

    Salam Ksi Bang @levycore

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        ·  6 years ago 

      Mantap bang semoga selalu dalam lindungan yang Maha kuasa, puisi yang sangat indah, sukses selalu buat @levycore

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          ·  6 years ago 

        Kosong yang tak kosong.
        Depth, Bang @levycore!

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            ·  6 years ago 

          Ini benar-benar kejutan, saya tak menyangka, ternyata bang @levycore selain ahli dalam memotret, juga hebat dalam meramu kata-kata, hingga menjadi kalimat yang indah.

          Mantap bang 👍👍👍

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              ·  6 years ago 

            Mantaapp bg

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                ·  6 years ago 

              Wow. Ternyata oh ternyata.
              Pokoknya dalaaaam, bahasanya...

              Nice poetry

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                  ·  6 years ago 

                Hi @levycore puisi dalem juga,,,ga lagi galaukan🤗😊 salam kenal...I like poetry to..

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                    ·  6 years ago 

                  singkat padat dan penuh makna,inilah puisi yang sangat menarik sekali,terimakasih @levycore

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                      ·  6 years ago 

                    Woow, enggak nyangka bg. Tapi saya sangat senang dan barangkali inilah sisi lain seorang curator, mampu dan selalu bermamfaat buar yang lai. Sukses selalu bg, saya ingin tau kelanjutannya. So swet bg @levycore

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                        ·  6 years ago 

                      Riuhnya angin, aku yang menjadi saksi
                      Sendiri, hanya seorang diri bahkan tidak ada lagi suara kicauan burung-burung yang terdengar.

                      Jangan lupa bahagia kembali bang @levycore :)

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                          ·  6 years ago 

                        keren.. kali ini tampil dengan konten yang berbeda...
                        ilustrasi dan puisinya sangat sejiwa

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                            ·  6 years ago 

                          Hadir bang😁

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                              ·  6 years ago 

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                                ·  6 years ago 

                              Ternyata oh ternyata akhirnya berpuisi juga. Semoga terus bisa mendapat inspirasi.

                              Rimanya mantap! @levycore

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                                  ·  6 years ago 

                                Ternyata, Levy juga andal dalam menguntai kata membentuk puisi! Keren, penuh makna!

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                                    ·  6 years ago 

                                  Kosong tapi padat isinya, mengagumkan

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                                      ·  6 years ago 

                                    Kosong, tiada gunanya hidup kalau iman kosong di dalam jiwa

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                                        ·  6 years ago 

                                      Tiada kusangka...
                                      Tiada kuduga...

                                      Ini sungguh kosong yang teramat padat berisi!

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                                          ·  6 years ago 

                                        Selamat! Artikel anda masuk peringkat 5 kategori Tulisan Dengan Komentar Terbanyak, di 10 Besar Tulisan Hari Ini di https://steemit.com/peringkat/@puncakbukit/10-besar-tulisan-hari-ini-minggu-16-september-2018 .. :]

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