Hi there! Although your intro paragraph and the rest of your body was inconsistent, which was the main reason why I didn't feel like reading it at first, you made some good points about yourself.

Welcome to Steemit. Just as a tip, try to edit and maybe fix some spelling errors in the introduction so that you won't turn off others like myself who are fixated on proper grammar.

To my point of view, it felt like you put a lot of effort in the main body paragraphs for your post, but lacked any effort in the first paragraph:
"Hi Kumonitas Steemit Indonesia!
Good night Stemian ..
On this occasion I will introduce myself to the stemit in Indonesia and around the world."

I was skeptical and confused when you spelled Steemit as "Stemit" and then when you did a complete 180 flip in your body paragraphs, I almost asked myself if you were the same person or two different people.

Anyhow, you made a good effort and left a nice impression with your post. Hope you enjoy your days on Steemit and make many new friends here!

Cheers!

• interestinggirl