I recently joined steemit, enjoy this poem.
*** The moment I saw you cry***
I will always remember this bright afternoon,
When my vision so darkened,
My veins so chilled,
My heart startled,
I think I was changed,
When I finally realized that forever was what you wanted,
The moment I saw you cry.
You were out there by yourself,
I shut you away from where you wanted to live,
But this afternoon,
I wanted to hold you but I died inside,
I wanted to know you more, but guilt killed me,
I wanted to die with you,
The moment I saw you cry.
I saw you standing there in a bare body,
Straight from the bathroom,
Those drops still on your toned figure,
But you barely stood straight,
Your eyes were shocked,
You shivered and you were cold,
The moment I saw you cry.
You looked at me so deeply,
I was frightened,
I was sorry,
I had ruined us,
I saw those heavy tears,
You were like a little child,
The moment I saw you cry.
I ended it so soon,
I was very afraid of breaking your heart,
Especially when I discovered you wanted me for keeps,
Nevertheless, I did it anyway,
You were all by yourself,
I cried my heart out,
The moment I saw you cry.
I followed you to the bedroom,
I wanted to hold you,
I wanted to reverse my words,
However, I could not,
I wanted to apologize,
I was so hurt,
The moment I saw you cry.
I felt the love I felt the first day,
But this time it was cold,
It was betrayed,
I wish I never existed at that moment,
You were deeply hurt,
I could tell with every painful sob you gave,
The moment I saw you cry.
I came on top of your jittering bare body,
Watched those tears head down to your ears,
Your running nose so red,
I cried too much and kissed you,
I tasted your tears and swallowed every drop,
I was touched,
The moment I saw you cry.
I will always remember,
Your shaky touch on my back that evening,
You pulled me closer to feel your heartbeat,
You did not say a word,
I knew you wanted me forever,
I wanted to turn your world around,
The moment I saw you cry.
You were so shattered,
You did not say a word,
You were so sad,
So shocked,
I could not hold those words anymore,
I touched your face and cried,
The moment I saw you cry.
I said I was sorry,
I promised to love you more,
You kissed me,
It lasted short though,
I DID IT AGAIN and I regret,
The moment I saw you cry.
I think I saw you cry
NB: This is my original content from my blog :
http://carolecarols.blogspot.co.ke/2013/09/poetry-moment-i-saw-you-cry.html
Such a great piece! I look forward to see more of it!
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Thank you @alketcecaj. Stay tuned.
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Beautiful! It gave me goose-bumps ! Thank you for sharing it!
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
you are welcome @datatreemap. I hope I will keep up with the good work.
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Welcome to steemit @caroltim I hope you really enjoy being here....... have a great day ahead.
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Thank you @universalpro, I really enjoy doing what i like in a great community. Great day too.
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Welcome to Steem @caroltim.
Do read A thumb rule for steemit minnows - 50:100:200:25 for starter tips.
Spend time reading Steem Blue Paper to know how Steem blockchian works and if you still have any queries ask them on our Ask me anything about Steemit post and we will try to answer that.
All the Best!!!
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Thank you @steemladder for your tips on succeeding in steemit. Often, I look for these kinds of tips to help me understand what makes the community grow as I want to be a part of that development.
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
welcome here to help you, i know you can do it just push yourself forword
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Thank you @shaheem, I will keep uploading great content as long as I can. I often create content and I'm sure I will improve my creativity.
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
welcome join steemit, give your imagination here
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
When you copy/paste or repeatedly type the same comments you could be mistaken for a bot.
Tips to avoid being flagged
Thank You! ⚜
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Thank you @hiranur, I'm looking forward to coming up with more creative content in the future.
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Great poem, very emotional. I just left you a follow for more of these future posts!
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Thank you @cryptodj99, most of my contents are genuine expressions of my personal experiences, that is why they create a vivid picture. I hope to keep up creating substantial content to stay relevant. Followed back.
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
I agrre, staying relevant is key! I love this community!
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
please endeavor to use proper tagging, wrong use of tag can penalize you on steemit. this is not an introduceyourself post...
that said, this is a good poetry
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Thank you @dante31. Noted.
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Very touching
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
@kengtong thank you for your feedback.
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit