Welcome! I really enjoyed this poem. It is filled with such immense emotion, and the repetition at the end of each stanza is very, very powerful. I am most impressed, and was most touched by, this stanza:
'I hope he treats you like a princess,
Like how I treated you like my queen...
I guess that's the end of our story,
It was such a beautiful scene...'
It really expresses the pain inflicted upon a heart after losing someone so close to you. Well done, and thank you for sharing!
PS: If you are interested and have some spare time, I have some poetry on my blog too. :)
Hello @lukakorba, thanks for the warm greeting. Thank you for showing interest in my poem. I also take inspirations from some poems I read and it would interest me to read some of your poetry too.
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