Lovemaking: * An Acrostic Etheree/Reverse Etheree Poem *

in jcedwards •  8 years ago 

Lovemaking

Lay
On soft
Velveteen
Ecstasy waits—
Mouth traces my curves
Awakens dream’s yearning
Kittenish, I stretch, and purr
In languid arch with your caress
Night-time and moon-rays, witness to love
Glorious passion, that‘s sealed with our kiss

Gentle embraces— sweet love’s afterglow
Nurtured by trust and lavished with care
In word and deed, cherish our time
Kept vibrant, fresh with romance
As we share in our hearts
Magical moments—
Empyrean
Vibration
Of our
Love

(c) J C Edwards

  • An Acrostic Etheree/Reverse Etheree Poem *
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I came here because you came to my page on the recommendation of @meesterboom ... one of my favorite peoples! He's amazing, and his accent is pure joy.

I'm not commenting for that, though. I've been reading your work and really enjoy your versatility, poetic turn of phrase, and experimentation. I did an Acrostic Poetry Challenge a while back and it was really fun, but your addition of the reverse was really smart :)

I've followed you and look forward to reading your work moving forward (and backwards).

Hehe, Cheers dude! I really liked that reverse thing too. It's great stuff.

Very much! Also, much appreciation for the recommendation to check out my blog page! You rock as hard as ever, sir

Your page is a fantastic place to stop by!! Good call on DGB btw!! ;0)

I will always enjoy that, just a day after I listed DGB as my favorite new bet in Tier C in a Steemit post it started that skyrock climb. Are you still holding, did you make out like a bandit?

I am going against my safe nature and holding because madly I believe it's gonna climb further after I read about what is behind it!!

Good man! If it's a sizable sum you invested, I'd at least make sure to pull profit up to initial investment amount.

I made a lot on DGB, but ultimately I shook out well before this crazy rise. But I wasn't long. If I had gone against my nature on this one, I would've racked up an additional 8> BTC at current rates.

Such a wild, wild west

It is a wild wild West! The best way of describing it. I sold enough to recoup 4x my initial stake which gives me that special happy comfort at just looking on now :0)

Thank you so much - I really appreciate your kind words and the follow. I hope you enjoy the read! :) I hope to continue to catch up on your posts as well. :)

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Thank you so much! I have no idea what this is about, but I'm delighted to receive the badge!

I like this a lot, particularly the reverse!

A note on the tags, the first tag is the most important and should be poetry. This is the category it will be filed in. I am not sure why this is important after all it is one of your other tags but for maximum exposure I would recommend you do it. If you don't mind me saying that is :0)

Oh, I'm so glad you liked it - as I said, the format was definitely a challenge, but I enjoy all classical poetry formats, so it was fun to write.

I did not know that about the tags, thank you so much! Is it possible for me to change them, or should I just remember that for future posts?

You can change them but the first one is set in stone even if it looks like it has changed. Just do it for the future ones. I am sure it will make a difference. Do you use chat? You can post links in some of the chat promotion rooms also. Anything for a boost!

Chat? There's a chat? Where do I find that? LOL, I'm still such a newbie!

There is a chat! Lol, it's in the menu at the top right!!

Wow, I registered and checked it out - even put this poem on the promotion channel ... but holy cow it all looks confusing, lol. Sat in the "welcome room" for a bit all by myself. lol. This is going to take some time - thank you so much for your help, it's much appreciated!

It's no bother!! There is a promotion channel that you can put your post in. No more than once every two hours. There are others too!

Edit: silly me, you got the promotion channel!!

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Thank you!