steem poem - 또 다시 봄

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또 다시 봄 @jjy

돌이켜 생각할
추억이라도 남았을까
익숙해 진 어두움
겨우내 바랜 가랑잎도
언 땅 위에 숨죽이는데

이 적막함을 견디다
눈을 감으면
이대로 숨이 멎는 건 아닐까
바람은 여전히 매몰차겠고

물오리의 서툰 날개 짓에도
흔들리는 햇살로 전해들은
봄의 초대에
황급히 챙긴 얼마간의 희망과
내색 못할 사랑
때늦은 악수를 나눈다.

대문을 그려 주신 @cheongpyeongyull님께 깊은 감사를 드립니다.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    이 적막함을 견디다
    눈을 감으면
    이대로 숨이 멎는 건 아닐까
    바람은 여전히 매몰차겠고

    이 부분이 마음에 확 와 닿네요.
    추운 겨울을 버티고 봄을 맞는 마음이 저럴까요?

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        ·  7 years ago 

      잠을 자는 버들강아지도
      파란 하늘아래 눈이 부시고
      언 땅도 단단히 지른 빗장을
      풀고 있습니다.

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          ·  7 years ago 

        아주 명필 시입니다. 봄이오는 느낌을 팍팍 느끼게 하시네요.

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            ·  7 years ago 

          드디어 오늘부터 봄입니다.
          어제부터 내린 비가 묵은 겨울을 말끔히 씻어냈습니다.

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              ·  7 years ago 

            흔들리는 햇살은 어떤 목소리로 봄을 전했을까요
            오늘도 풍경이 그려지는 시
            감사히 보고 갑니다..

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                ·  7 years ago 

              이맘때 조종천에 가면 물오리들이
              삼삼오오 정답게 봄을 누리고 있습니다.

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                좋은시 잘읽고 갑니다

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  감사합니다.
                  아늑한 밤 되세요.

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                      ·  7 years ago 

                    봄이 오고 있는게 보이는거 같아요. 햇살하나라도 따뜻함을 느낄수 있지요.

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                        ·  7 years ago 

                      누가 시켰을까요
                      햇살에게 더 맑게 빛나라고
                      어떻게 알았을까요
                      냇물에게 소리를 내며 흘러도 좋다고

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                          ·  7 years ago 

                        본받고 갑니다. 좋은 시 감사합니다.

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                            ·  7 years ago 

                          봄하늘이 참 좋아요.
                          구경 하셨나요?

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                              ·  7 years ago 

                            네. 근데 제가 있는 곳은 아직 좀 춥네요.

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                                ·  7 years ago 

                              크~ 흔들리는 햇살로 전해들은 초대라니.. 어찌 거부할수 있겠습니까..^^늦었어도 행복한 악수가 되기를 바래봅니다..

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                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                분명 행복했을 것입니다.
                                기쁨으로 나누는 악수는
                                또 얼마나 찬란한 봄을 꾸밀까요.

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                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                  봄 봄 봄 봄
                                  봄이 왔어요...

                                  라는 말이 그리운 요즘이네요...

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                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                    봄은 우선 볼게 많은 계절입니다.
                                    어디를 보아도
                                    눈살 찡그리는 일 없는
                                    순수한 아름다움과 만나는 계절
                                    좋은 일만 있으세요.

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                                        ·  7 years ago (edited)

                                      새 생명이 움트는 봄이 옵니다.
                                      즐거운 날 되세요.

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                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                        세상의 어떤 죽음도
                                        봄을 이기지 못합니다.
                                        벌써 새싹이 움트고 있어요.

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                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                          그렇죠.. 봄소리가 납니다~^^

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                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                            봄 소리는 어떻게 들리나요?
                                            봄 봄 봄~~~~~

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                                                ·  7 years ago 

                                              Hi @jjy,

                                              It seems you got a $6.3496 upvote from @cjsdns at the last minute before the payout. (22.4h) and this comment is to make everyone aware.

                                              Please follow @abusereports for additional reports of potential reward pool abuse. Thank you.

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