또리와 함께 떠나는 습작시 - [배려 혹은 소심]

in kr •  7 years ago  (edited)

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지나가는 길손이 눈에 밟혀
떨어져 나가는 낙엽을 붙들어맨다
그냥 그대로 놔둬도 좋을 것을

곤히 잠든 별님이 깨어날까
사뿐사뿐 내려앉는 새벽의 이슬
소리치며 뛰어내려도 될 것을

숲 속의 화음이 살짜기 어긋날까
꾀꼬리는 점점 더 즐거움을 잃어간다
언제나처럼 신나게 부르면 될 것을

흩날리는 낙엽은 고독을 노래하고
아침의 전령은 하루를 깨운다
행복의 노랫소리 숲 속에 울려 퍼지면
마음의 짐들은 허공으로 날아간다

흐르면 흐르는 대로
멈추면 멈추는 대로

가는 겨울을 기억하며 "렛 잇 고" 듣고 가실게요!

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      ·  7 years ago 

    3월의 시작을 아름답게 보내세요^^
    @clayop님이 지원하시는 스팀마노에 관심을 가져보세요^^
    https://steemit.com/steemmano/@steemmano/5abbhz 안내
    https://steemit.com/steemmano/@steemmano/2018-3 신청

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        ·  7 years ago 

      넵.. 스팀 마노 주의깊게 보고 있습니다. 한 구좌가 만 스팀이라 언감생심이긴 합니다..ㅠ.ㅠ

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          ·  7 years ago 

        마지막 부분이 특히나 여운이 남네요.
        흐르면 흐르는 대로
        멈추면 멈추는 대로
        잠시 몸을 관찰하며 심장이 어찌 뛰는지
        호흡이 어찌 움직이는지 바라봐야 겠습니다.

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            ·  7 years ago 

          아! 소중한 느낌 감사합니다. 오늘 하루도 즐겁고 활기찬 하루가 되길 바래요!

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              ·  7 years ago 

            그 무엇하나
            맘대로 하기 힘든 세상에서
            순리에 맡겨야 제대로 흐른다는 것을
            알게 되는 것이 삶이지 싶어요

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                ·  7 years ago 

              넵.. 귀한 소감 감사드립니다. 모든 것은 순리에 맡긴다..

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                우와! 사진 좋습니다.

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  구글 펌인디.. 저작권이 ㅠ.ㅠ 무료 사이트를 자주 이용해야 할 것 같아요.. ㅎㅎ

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                      ·  7 years ago 

                    흐르면 흐르는대로..
                    멈추면 멈추는 대로..
                    너무 좋습니다

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                        ·  7 years ago 

                      오옷!! 감사합니다.. ㅎㅎ!!

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                          ·  7 years ago 

                        좋은시 잘 읽었어요
                        모든것은 순리대로 가 정답인것같네요~~

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                            ·  7 years ago 

                          넵.. 순리대로가 답입니다.. ㅎㅎ!!

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                              ·  7 years ago 

                            우와~~ 시적인 심성이 아주 괜찮군요.

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                                ·  7 years ago 

                              ㅎㅎ! 과찬이십니다.. 마음에 단디 새기겠습니다.

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                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                잠시나마 마음이 차분해지는것 같습니다.
                                편안한 주말 보내시길 바랄게요

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                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                  넵! 오시는 발걸음 감사하고 가시는 걸음걸음 조심해서 가시길.. 감사합니다.

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                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                    하하 저도 무료사이트 자주 이용해요. 픽사베이 같은 곳이요. 시와 어우러진 사진이 멋지네요~

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                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                      오옷! 픽사베이.. 유명한 사이트죠.. 들러 주셔서 감사합니다.

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                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                        시에서 걱정말고 나아가라는 느낌을 받습니다 :) 잘 보고 갑니다!

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                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                          넵.. 이것저것 너무 신경쓰지말고 순리대로 원래대로 가즈아! 하는거죠.. 감사합니다.

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                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                            숲 속의 화음이 살짜기 어긋날까
                                            꾀꼬리는 점점 더 즐거움을 잃어간다
                                            언제나처럼 신나게 부르면 될 것을

                                            스팀잇을 하면서 살짝 눈치를 보고있는 제가 겹쳐보였습니다 ㅎㅎ
                                            좋은 시 감사합니다 :D

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                                                ·  7 years ago 

                                              소중한 발자국 남겨주셔서 감사합니다.스팀잇은 신나게...

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                                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                                그냥 그대로 놔둬도 좋을 것을...

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                                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                                  그러게요

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                                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                                    잘 모르지만 마음이 차분해지는 시인것 같아요^^ 보팅&팔로우하고 가요~!!^^

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                                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                                      귀한 발걸음 감사합니다.

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                                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                                        감성적인 시.. 좋습니다 :)

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                                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                                          귀한 댓글 감사합니다...

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                                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                                            겨울이 싫지 않은 주인공.. 부럽습니다

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                                                                ·  7 years ago 

                                                              방문해 주셔서 감사합니다...

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