[Sirin's poem] 건드리지 마

in kr •  7 years ago  (edited)

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건드리지 마

나 아무것도 하고 싶지 않아

건드리지 마

나 가식적인 니 말 듣기도 싫어

건드리지 마

나 후회하기 싫으니까 저리 가

건드리지 마

난 내가 알아서 하니까 신경 꺼

건드리지 마

그냥 제발 나 좀 내버려두라



안녕하세요. @sirin418 입니다. 오늘은 @thecminus 님의 작품을 보고 시를 써봤어요. 잘 감상해주시고 씨마이너스님 작품도 많이 사랑해주세요! (정말 예뻐요 ㅠ)

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      ·  7 years ago 

    크으으... 제가 예전에 괴롭히던 친구들이 있었는데 참고만 있었던 적이 있었거든요. 정말 저렇게 말하고싶었는데..!ㅜ

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        ·  7 years ago 

      저도 그런 아픔이 있었습니다. 생각해보니 글로 승화하는 것도 좋겠다 싶네요. 쓰고 있던 게 있었는데 기회가 되면 다듬어서 스팀잇에 올려봐야겠습니다. 같이 아픔을 나누며 극복하고 도움을 주는 세상이 너무 아름다울 것 같아요.

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          ·  7 years ago 

        공감합니다. 말 정말 예쁘게 하시네욤!ㅎㅎ

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            ·  7 years ago 

          제가 너무 힘들때 매번 느끼는거에요. 건들지말아줬음 좋겠어요.
          힘들어서 말도 곱게 안나가는데..
          그림이랑 시랑 너무 잘 연관되네요

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              ·  7 years ago 

            읽어주셔서 감사해요. 하는 사업 잘 되시길 바랍니다. 잘 되시면 저한테 메로나..

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                ·  7 years ago 

              5SBD 가즈아~~~ 그때쯤이면 5개면 100만원이겠죠? ㅎ

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                엥?ㅋㅋㅋㅋ 그렇게 되면 전 차 뽑습니다.

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  행복회로 ~~~~ 돌아가는 소리 들리십니까? ㅋㅋㅋ

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                      ·  7 years ago 

                    아주 잘 들립니다.ㅋㅋㅋㅋ

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                        ·  7 years ago 

                      대문과 연결되는 ㅎㅎ잘보고가요

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                          ·  7 years ago 

                        읽어주셔서 감사해요 ㅎㅎ 조금 수정했어요. 좀 더 검토하고 올렸어야 했는데 제 행동이 아쉽습니다. 오늘 하루도 마무리 잘 하시길.

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                            ·  7 years ago 

                          나중에 이불발차기...만 안하시면 되지요 ㅎ.. 너무 아쉬워마셔요

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                              ·  7 years ago 

                            핰ㅋㅋㅋ 이미 많이 하는걸요..

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                                ·  7 years ago 

                              앗..ㅎ. 후회 없이만 글을 쓰면 되겠다는 의미였어요... 화이팅...!

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                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                넵! ㅎㅎ

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                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                  시 잘 읽었습니다.
                                  왠지 건드리면 울어버릴 것 같은 대문 그림이네요.
                                  @thecminus 님의 작품도 보러 가야겠네요.ㅋ

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                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                    읽어주셔서 감사합니다. 씨마이너스님 것도 많이 봐주세요!ㅎㅎ

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                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                      글도 그림도 너무 좋네요
                                      공감 가요^^

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                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                        읽어주셔서 감사해요.

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                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                          혼자 조요히 지내고 싶을때가 있어요
                                          건드리지마에 모든것이 다 들어있네요^^

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                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                            읽어주셔서 감사해요.

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                                                ·  7 years ago 

                                              전...반대로 조금 건드려줬으면 하는데..애정이 필요해~~ ㅠㅠ

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                                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                                하핫, 앞으로 제가 건드려 드리죠.

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                                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                                  ㅎㅎ 감사합니다 기대할께여

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                                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                                    예쁘네요
                                                    ♡♡

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                                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                                      예쁘게 봐주셔서 고마워요.

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                                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                                        일러스트랑 딱 맞아 떨어지는군요.
                                                        굿x100입니다^^

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                                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                                          들러주셔서 감사합니다^^

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                                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                                            와 그림 정말 예뻐요! ㅎㅎ 그림 속 여자와 글이 잘 어울리네요

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                                                                ·  7 years ago 

                                                              ㅎㅎ @thecminus 님의 작품이에요. 감사해요 ㅎㅎ

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                                                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                                                그림이 정말 매혹적이예요....!!!!! 글도 시원시원합니다👍

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                                                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                                                  봐주셔서 감사해요!

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                                                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                                                    (정말 건들면 안될 것 같으니 괄호로 말해야지) (시린님 안녕!)

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                                                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                                                      ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ안녕!

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                                                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                                                        역시 씨마님의 소녀는 참 이쁩니다 ~ ^^

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                                                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                                                          마자요 ㅠㅠ 스팀잇에서 여자로 살고 싶을 정도에요.

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                                                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                                                            시린님.. 가끔 제 마음이 이 시와 꼭 닮아 있는데
                                                                            너무 마음에 드네요^^ 좋은 글 감사드려요

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                                                                                ·  7 years ago 

                                                                              읽어주셔서 감사합니다. 조금이라도 예은님 마음에 닿았길.

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                                                                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                                                                슬픈데 무서운 느낌이드네요

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                                                                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                                                                  그런가요. 다시 보니 그런 것 같기도 하네요. 그래도 저라는 인간 자체는 무섭지 않습니다. ㅎㅎ

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                                                                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                                                                    제 마음고 ㅏ같내요 ㅜㅜ 그냥 가만히 쳐 앉아 있으면 알아서 할텐대 그깟 밥상앞 수저 가로로 놓기 or 세로로 놓기 가지고 목숨거는 그놈이 봤으면 좋겠어용 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

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                                                                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                                                                      마음이 많이 상하셨겠네요. 본인과 진지하게 이야기를 해보면 어떨까요. 좋은 밤 되세요.

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                                                                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                                                                        건드리지 않겠습니다~
                                                                                        살포시 댓글만 남기고 갑니다..^^

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                                                                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                                                                          하하. 들러주셔서 감사합니다.

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                                                                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                                                                            가식이 아닌 진심으로 흔적을 남깁니다. ㅎㅎ

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                                                                                              들러주셔서 감사합니다.

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                                                                                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                                                                                저렇게 말씀하시니 한 번 더 건들여 보고 싶고 신경쓰고 싶습니다. 이게 인간의 본성이라면, 본성을 자극하는 시를 쓰신 거라 굉장히 훌륭한 작가시라고 할 수있겠네요 :) 즐거운 주말 되시기 바래요 !!

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                                                                                                  감상 감사합니다. 빅시마님도요!

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                                                                                                    가끔 그런기분 들때 있지요 ~~ ㅋㅋ 씨마이너스님 그림은 역시 예뻐요 ㅠㅠ

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                                                                                                      유나님 것두요!><

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