[Sirin's poem] 별들의 폭포.

in kr •  7 years ago  (edited)



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별을 보다

눈물이 났다.

그리움이 쏟아진다.

주체할 수가 없다.

오늘 밤은 네 생각이

나에게로 떨어져

내 잠을 방해할 것이다.











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      ·  7 years ago 

    ㅠㅠ 저도 아직 이별의 아픔이 남아있는지라 마음이 아프네요

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        ·  7 years ago 

      크헙.. 공감해주셔서 감사합니다. 전 좀 지난지라. 다음 사랑을 기약하고 있죠. 곧 극복하시길.

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          ·  7 years ago 

        크.... 감성 ... 감성에 취한다

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            ·  7 years ago 

          크..저도 제 글에 취합..크흠.

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              ·  7 years ago 

            군생활할 때 넋없이 별만 쳐다보던 기억이 나네요. 그 때 생각과 비슷한 느낌의 시 입니다.
            좋은 글 감사드립니다.

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                ·  7 years ago 

              읽어주셔서 감사합니다.

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                실연당한 저의 밤같네요...아름다운 시 감사합니다.

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  허르.. 감사합니다. 극복을 응원하겠습니다.

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                      ·  7 years ago 

                    참 아픈 감정입니다.
                    금일 읽은 책 구절이 생각나네요.

                    만약 네가 내 곁을 떠나간다고 해도 인생은 계속되겠지

                    저는 이 글귀와 작성하신 시의 느낌이 참 비슷하다고 느껴지네요..ㅎㅎ

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                        ·  7 years ago (edited)

                      읽어주셔서 감사합니다. 그렇게 느껴주시니 감사할 따름입니다.

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                          ·  7 years ago (edited)

                        별처럼 쏟아지는 그리움은
                        얼마나 찬란한 기억이길래..
                        기억 속 그 사람을 꿈결에서나마 보고 싶어도
                        보고 싶은 간절함에 잠들 수 없는 것처럼...

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                            ·  7 years ago 

                          저보다 잘 표현하신 것 같아요! 댓글 잘 읽었습니다. 하하.

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                              ·  7 years ago 

                            시린님의 감성이 좋아서
                            저도 모르게 너무 심취했네요

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                                ·  7 years ago 

                              항상 봐주셔서 감사드립니다. 이렇게 좋은 말만 들어도 될 지 모르겠네요. 항상 자신을 돌아보는 사람이 되야겠습니다.

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                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                왠지 실제로 보면 정말 눈물이 날것 같은
                                너무 아름다운 풍경입니다.

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                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                  감사합니다. 안타깝게도 사진은 픽사베이에서 가져왔습니다. 하하.

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                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                    그리움이 쏟아지면 주체하기가 힘듭니다... 멋진 포스팅에 잠시 머물다 갑니다..

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                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                      항상, 읽어주셔서 감사합니다.

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                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                        cchstory님이 sirin418님을 멘션하셨습니다. 아래에서 확인해볼까요? ^^
                                        스티미언 포스팅 핵심 키워드(주제) 큐레이션 [스티미언 홍보 프로젝트 1]

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                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                          살아 있는 가슴이군요.

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                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                            아.. 제 가슴을 따듯하게 해주셨어요. 저에겐 모든 표현이네요. 감사합니다.

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                                                ·  7 years ago 

                                              boddhisattva님이 sirin418님을 멘션하셨습니다. 아래에서 확인해볼까요? ^^
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                                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                                저는 정말 죽기 전 소원이 우주에서 별들을 한번 직접 바라보는 겁니다.
                                                사진으로만 봐도 너무 이쁘네요 ㅎ

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                                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                                  읽어주셔서 감사합니다.

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                                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                                    오우. 좋네요.

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                                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                                      읽어주셔서 감사합니다.

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                                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                                        젊음의 특권
                                                        많이...

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