【창작시】 아버지

in kr •  8 years ago 

매일 깍던 수염

문득 떠오른다


가까우면서 멀고

비슷하면서 다른


말하고 싶어도

말할 수 없는


껴안고 싶어도

안을 수 없는


혹시나 하는 마음

용기내어 손 내민다


차디찬 손바닥

피어나는 아련함

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      ·  8 years ago 

    좋은글 잘읽었습니다!
    보팅과 팔로우 하고 갑니다~ 자주 소통해요^^

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        ·  8 years ago 

      감사합니다.
      소통 좋죠~ 팔로우 했어요~

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          ·  8 years ago 

        재주가 좋으시네요.감상하고 보팅하고갑니다

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            ·  8 years ago 

          감사합니다. ^^

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              ·  8 years ago 

            좋은 시네요 :)

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                ·  8 years ago 

              ^______^

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                  ·  8 years ago 

                그대는 내면에 아름다움을 아는 멋쟁이 시인입니다.
                그대를 응원 합니다.

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                    ·  8 years ago 

                  응원 감사합니다.^^

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                      ·  8 years ago 

                    부친을 생각하시는 마음이 담겨 있군요.
                    잘 읽었습니다.
                    행복하세요~

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                        ·  8 years ago 

                      neojew 님도 행복하시길 바랍니다.^^

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                          ·  8 years ago 

                        '따스한' 이 아니라 '차디찬'이란 형용사가 나온 것이 신선하게 다가오네요.

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                            ·  8 years ago (edited)

                          거울을 사이로 자신과 손바닥을 맞데는 모습을 표현한 장면인데요. 나름 신경 썼답니다.^^
                          좋게 봐주셔서 감사합니다.

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                              ·  8 years ago (edited)

                            그리움에 업봇 누르고가요

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                                ·  8 years ago 

                              감사합니다.^^

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