I'm an old person. I fall in love with old mindsets, scent of old books antique carving on wall, old friends, old manners, old lifestyle and everything old. I have saved broken pieces of my favourite vase. I value long real conversation over today's social media chit chat. Apart of me find piece in old words and apart of me struggles in the complexities of modern tales.
Ghalib khayal e ishq reasonates in my mind.
Rumi love has separate place in my little heart.
I fathom things people don't, yet I am blank on somebody's query as to "WHO AM I"
People know me as the most sorted out person they can find in my age yet when I raise my hands in front on God I worship, I find myself clueless, Have I forgotten how to pray?
Constructive criticism I highly appreciate, please do tell me how do you find my work? I would love to hear from you and improve..
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My impression: You are describing your view of the "old person" mannequin, not your thoughts. Very cool, and very deep (really cool)!! But not obvious, which makes it even better. References are unknown to me, but that's ok. Excellent query remark. Questioning remark, very good. Not much to be critical of here.
Awesome post!! 2 thumbs up!!
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Thankyou I really highly appreciate u for pointing this things .. I am on learning stage of this work I will try my best and work on it I'll take care next time and yes i forgot to add reference sorry .. I'll be careful next time.. thanks For correcting me.. 🤗
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life life life
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Beautiful article. Thank you for sharing.
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Thankyou for ur support
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You're welcome.
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Upvoted done
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Nice upvoted !
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I upvoted u plz upvote my posts
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WOW! Beautiful to read. Strong content
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Thankyou so much
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beautiful!!!
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Thankyou my friend
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Very well written, makes you think. These were my thoughts:
Accept who you are and be your best YOU. We are all unique for a reason. no one's perfect, but we can learn and grow.
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Yes you are right thankyou for ur beautiful words.. ✌🏻
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But you are not old at all !! This article is very nice!
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It was just a thought .. thanks for your support
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Thank you too man!
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Nice!!!👌👌👌👌
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Thankyou
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Come on! How can you find these words to explain such an awful alienation?!
I do not read much Rumi, but Rumi must be everywhere because of the essence of the universe that was hummed by him. I also found him in your words. He and you I think not a strange or alienated from the modern world today, but precisely what is most needed. You feel in everything that is old, precisely because you really, like Rumi, is someone who is being sought.
Amazing.
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Hi @akareem, this is a nice piece of writing, thank you for sharing
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Thanks friend
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Thankyou so much
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Nice
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Thanks
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nice!
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Thanks..
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great
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Thankyou
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You have a good work!
I like it!
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Thankyou so much
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Akareem then I must show you my house on the inside, thanks for reply. All my furniture is from before 1910 got from my grandmother. I am also old if you feel like it go read my post on brain in tumbledryer.
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I'll have a look .. thanks for stopping by..
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nice post very intresting
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hmmm nice thoughts
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I'm interested in reading your thoughts! Thank you!
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Thankyou so much I'm glad you liked it
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