There are good ideas in this post. But I get the impression Kaylin didn't write this article. Her other articles are a native-English, natural, and personality-filled. This seems like she's outsourced the writing without editing it. Here are a few giveaways:
"They are not lured by the societies gray attitude to pretend the elegance"
" They don’t have obstinacy to material life, so they spend less."
"At the same time, they will have a good sum of balance expenditure which will be good savings for future."
These are not phrases that a native English speaker would say. It's also written in the third person "they the minimalists" - while offering very little personal information or anecdotes.
There are a few other articles that Kaylin has posted which haven't felt like her:
https://steemit.com/food/@kaylinart/save-money-on-your-food
https://steemit.com/funny/@kaylinart/how-to-apply-deodorant-a-detailed-guide
Now I don't mind if you post work by other writers. The idea here is to provide value to the Steemit community. But I don't think these thin posts about a general topic, which could have been written by an outsourced writer in Bangladesh for $10, deserve to get $900. (At time of writing.)
So for that reason I've downvoted it.
I did write this article! I write all of my articles. Some of the posts you mentioned, Save money on your food, and How to apply deodorant, were older posts. The "Save Money On Your Food" was originally a blog post from my blog on my other website, When I first started blogging. (This is before Cheetah bot existed) Here it is
I also have articles that were past school papers that I updated for the site :) I picked out ones that I felt had value.
I've recently been using Grammarly to help edit my posts and proofread them. I'm not the best writer but I feel like I've been improving.
For this article, This is a sum of what I've been learning personally. I've been studying minimalism because I want to make myself more like this. I used third person to give advice to others on how they can become this way. I'm not a full blown minimalist yet, But I hope to be soon!
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I apologise for my comment. It just seemed that it had a very different tone to the majority of your other articles and much poorer grammar/spelling/syntax.
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I'm sorry about that! I've been really exhausted lately! Thats probably why. I'll try and proofread my posts better :)
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