Bitter, Better, Badder.... Bunch'a Homemade Baloney

in life •  7 years ago  (edited)

Who are you? how do you handle your life?
do you see strife in the lime light?
black or lack,
lust or lavender...
pacifist mongers..
plagiarist poets

praises of graves and down trodden saints,
corners behind the curves
perfections beyond the blurs.

are you counting the tocks and ticking past your existence?
seeking love in a fat ass culdesac.

do you feel wronged and long shot left out?

folks be expecting a lot. feeling God forgot.

but the shits on you...until you buck up and start whining in a vacuum...
this life is gonna make of you what you give.

careful what you focus on...cause that focus is where you live

sure its easy for him to say...woe is me.. woe is them kids starving in gutters of drought.

i am not saying it isn't true.... i'm just saying half the people that focus on suffering ... go there through self extension.

the best thing we can do to aide poverty is live rich...not yacht and pimping spot rich... but life rich.

our greatest wealth comes in our choices of existence.
at least for those who have these choices

and you wont find me denying privilege.

yet how you wield it...that's the subject.

i believe in grey areas... i don't think the cover is whats in a book.

i think doing nothing is the most effective way of getting shit done.

i could brag about how many people i have helped...but then id be a twat.

what if we all just gave and accepted...
loved and neglected...
judged and begrudged all evenly.... without our own bullshit perspectives.

ha ha... your thoughts are as pointless as mine...but this will never stop me from sharing.

today i gave a beggar a dime... tomorrow my hand out is slapped down and its fine.

we fight against our own natural polarity...

when will we finaly just embrace the simple truth of duality.

right and wrong live on the same damn line.

we are Butt wrinkles in the cracks of time

yours truly,
the Butt

this is original writing written now
both these photos were found on duck duck go images
(i was looking up dead ends and culdasacs for photo... this first image seemed so appropriate to me... i guess it is an album... but whatever it is...thanks...i felt it fit.)

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"careful what you focus on...cause that focus is where you live" True that.

its seems so obvious...yet so often overlooked

"Butt wrinkles in the cracks of time" - Yep that seems about right! I enjoyed your baloney.

I think the first image is fitting perfectly with the rest! to be honest I re-read it twice and still think I did not get the whole point of it. But I must say a lot is resonating to me.

we fight against our own natural polarity...
when will we finaly just embrace the simple truth of duality.

I think this part is especially deep and it takes time to really absorb it but a nice way to bring it along.

The pictures might be dark but the meaning is so true!

(c) "The Invention Of Duality" by Robby Donaghey
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Have another pint , and give the queen a kiss for me, while I read this again and let it sink in.

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

I hardly know what to say, but reading this... uffff,... still don't know what to say, but you made me want more Baloney, I was never crazy about it till now.... It is touching, heartfelt, made me think, emotional... and I had no Lager...
This is poetry to me!!

thank you @abbak7. i am glad that you felt my writing and had such a response. it is meant to come from many directions, mostly the poem is designed as a mirror... to aid us to feel and see what we have inside. my intention in writing is not a judgment... it is an exercise in contrasts. i believe strongly in the power of dualism. within each of us is all things... joy to boredom, love to hate, power to weakness, whatever to where ever.....these contrasts are all directly attached. the trick in my mind is seeing most of life's core contrasts as a whole and not separate. at least that's what i try.

Perspective of life from a guilty and gluttony point of view..I agree on most and might be useless ..the best thing we do to aide poverty is not to create it!! That is if we have that choice..the cover of the book rarely resembles the content of the book and the content it is rarely gray ..I am utopic in thinking but I do not belive that anybodys story can be so dull no matter the circumstances it is always a true color( call me an optimist I dare you! ). And yes my thoughts might be pointless but it is that what you described that makes us humans ..pointless Butt if we all gave up and accepted then Who are we? How do we handle life?..the rest is your own poetic moment..

it appears a misinterpretation is in the air.
but the optimist in me will take your comment as a compliment...😎

It was a compliment!!:)) great post hehe

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