Machine Man II
I once was a butterfly
world sprung before my eyes
as a phantasmagoria of colors
and scents under the blue sky
I once used to land soft on feet
cushioned when I fell, sweet!
tasted the sour and defeat.
I was the nectar that summer secrete.
I was in love then and yet still I am
This one is different path, serene and calm.
Now the dark chew through colors
and sun is gone. There is none but a halm
in motion, fluttering in a slow cruise.
Falling like me to be shattered and bruised
Now the gravel bite through my shoes
This time I will not claim her. Blame her,
blame me or blame the incoherent blues.
you are free if you don't have to choose.
right?
This is my day 73 entry of the 100 days of poetry by @d-pend from SteemitSchool.
If you like what I'm doing here, help me out to get me some visibility and add me to your steemvoter or bring me a @curie vote like
at rasamuel@discord did which @f3nix thought I deserved and supported me through frustration. It's been more than four month of this.goddamnit.
Well, first of all, of all poems i have been reading, yours do have a unique appeal, it ignites a different feeling that is novel, thanks to the form of the poems in themselves and your choice of words. This is no exclusion from that.
Eloquently written in amazing rhymes, your poem compares love to a butterfly...at first, cool and calm and one that you compare its as to being gone.
Suffice it to say i learnt a new word, phantasmagoria.
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Come back for more
there's more in store
I am glad you liked it.:)
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Hi there! Welcome back :)
I've been away for past 3 weeks (short holiday) and finally im back :) Loads of catching up is awaiting me now.
I checked your profile and im glad to see that you're still very active on steemit.
How have you been doing?
(I upvoted number of posts today so my voting power is runnig very low. For that reason I cant upvote your post today but i will be following you closely)
Cheers,
Piotr
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