Today I felt it.
It was familiar,
but nothing like it used to be.
It was subtle.
It was gentle.
It was like the truth within.
Windows were shut,
doors were locked.
The shield for a king guarded my heart.
I longed for nothing,
My heartbeat,
drumming horribly but you danced like that.
You let go of the hands that held you.
You should maybe have been careful,
If only it was yours and not your heart’s decision.
It didn’t seem right.
It did feel right.
The oil had set the gears in motion.
Nobody should even try to understand this young man😅😅 he's a very complicated human being
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Lmao. C'mon don't be like this. I'm not a complicated human, I'm just not human :)
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iRobot ☹️
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I would love to understand him.
I am addicted to complex things!
@trillex
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Ahaa! Lool...you really want to understand @fisteganos? Have a chat with him...good luck dear. You need it😄
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Trillex Trillex!!!😁
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Lmao! Be very careful you this child
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Sad :/ Nice work. I have two interpretations for this: either the person left because they listened to their emotions. So just in the heat of the moment. Or the other possibility is that it all began with the heart. The person listened to their emotions and that's how it began. And because emotions are fleeting, the relationship was fleeting too.
Nice work. Simple yet lovely. Keep it up ^_^
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Interesting interpretations.
Should we always follow our hearts? I guess it depends on which side of the coin we find ourselves.
Thanks for the kind words.
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I smell a love related situation.
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Haha! Err... well... lol
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The heart wants what the heart wants. Falling in love stuvs i think
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You're not too far away from the truth :)
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A wonderful poem Thank you very much and continued your creations
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I have no idea what that was about but the words are perfectly put together. Well done.
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Haha! Thank you :)
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I wish you could tell but where I'm from:
I have read it again and with @revitellect's interpretation I think I'm closer. Only I wonder who left the hand that left them. Methinks it is the object of this writing. Sad but who knows, some good can come off it.
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I am surprised I didn't come across you before, I really like your style... total following! A moment in time framed- and kept alive... perfect.. on mty way to read more :]
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Thanks for blessing me with your visit today! and for all the kind words. I can't seem to get this smile off my face. :)
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@fisteganos Well done for sticking at it! Followed.
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Creativity at it peak...kudos
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Nice one baba
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Lovely poem✌️
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Celestial!
I would love to carry out a major literary analysis on this poem and post it on steemit before this week runs out.
Please do I have your permission?
@fisteganos
Cant wait to work on it. . .
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Carry on ma!
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Thank you!
Will let you know when I am through.
@fisteganos
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Brilliant. Such depth for a surface world.
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Good post The Days Behind The Day.
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