Long back
The bird of the soul was wounded
It was long back when all the golds turned into stone.
Long back
The season had scaled the greens of the city and had consumed itself.
It was Long back that the sun humbled by the glooming sunshine and had rushed into the shadowy cave.
Long back
I did dig up a grave for my soul in my chest
It was long back the trembling stones of the walls had broken every string of desire which once lived in my heart.
Since then
Whenever I bathe in the river of my suit, I rub myself against the sand of sorrow and emerge dry.
Since then
I missed my child's play, he never ever played at my feet, no flower ever smiled at my sight.
Since then
I have been enslaved by the darkness of my grave. My own reflection had been taken away.
I struggle and I struggle hard to fell the scent of the air.
But now
Now when I see this city of the Limbs drying up,
I long to erode myself in its water every day.
A tide rises and dies in me.
Now I cannot stand like a statue anymore. I seek the split by all means
It's ages now
When the bird of the soul was wounded and all the golds were turned into statue.
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very beautiful Poetry
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thanks buddy :)
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poco leo poesia, pero esta me atrapo. Excelente e encantó.
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No requiere mucho para comprender la poesía. El buen corazón puede sentir emociones y seguramente lo tienes. gracias amigo.
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HELLO GOOD PUBLICATION I WAIT CAN YOU AND PASS THROUGH THE MY BLOG
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thanks
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Very beautiful, it catch me so much <3
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Thanks Paula
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wow i like the chronology of time in which you flow and the deep emotions unveiled in the amazing choice of words like"...i rub myself against the sand of sorrows and emerge dry".I like the way i deeply got connected to this poem.I'm a slam poet artist in my little community in Cameroon.i write poems too.I write poems too and very new on steemit.will be really honored you check out my posts.Sofie's Voice
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Thanks a lot for your comment. I am glad that you like my poem.
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you are welcome.following you and looking forward not to miss any of your amazing piece
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:)
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nice post, nice job had done.here is mine
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You definitely write very well, I've already read 3 or 4 of your posts, your feelings hook me. I've posted a post that I think is good, but it hasn't had the votes that I think are necessary, can you help me? thank you in advance, here is the link https://steemit.com/photography/@vanessazune2/what-you-see
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Thanks Vanessa
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Realmente hermoso <3
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Gracias amigo :)
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Feel so good....!
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Thank you for subscribing to my blog ...
In this post you have feelings. Illustrations complement your thoughts.
And I show the feelings of the drawings, today I posted a sad and green still life on the blog...
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Thanks for feeling the spirit of the poem. :)
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awesome piece. I love how you played around words to send your message across
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Thanks buddy, I am glad that you liked my work. :)
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wow,,,nice art
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Thanks a lot buddy. :)
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Whenever I bathe in the river of my suit, I rub myself against the sand of sorrow and emerge dry., oh my goodness....i love it...i love it!!....thank you so much
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Thanks for reading buddy :)
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very sad poem :(
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:) i hope that you have liked it.
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I liked it :))
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:)
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Emotions were crying out from your words. I LOVED it. I'd read more haha
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Thanks a lot buddy. I am glad that you felt it. :)
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Lovely poetry 👌
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thanks :)
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Beautiful drawings
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thanks buddy
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To me you are describing a broken heart! Many had died of a broken heart. It is inevitable we all had experience brokenness by life's storms, but the key here, is no to dwell for to long there, we must develop winds and fly away like an eagle after his own molting.
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Broken heart sing sad songs and broken soul says nothing. I express the inner feelings of a broken soul. Its me, i can't say that but yes it could be me. :)
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Great job, Nice pictures. Hard work= 1 vote from me. :)
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Thanks mate :)
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No prob.
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Very poignant and soul stirring.
"I seek the split by all means" - i love this line :)
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Thanks buddy. I am glad that you felt the line. :)
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:-) :-)
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